What Can I Do?

July 6, 2010
By Cassiea. SILVER, Homestead, Florida
Cassiea. SILVER, Homestead, Florida
5 articles 1 photo 7 comments

Favorite Quote:
If I find in myself desires which nothing in this world can satisfy, the only logical explanation is that I was made for another world.
-C.S. Lewis


You yell at me all the time.
when I try to do something
you yell at me for making a mess
even though I try to prevent it.
When I do nothing
not annoying anyone
not making a mess
you still yell at me
because I am not being productive.
What can I do without
you yelling at me?
What can I do?


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Hope you like it and also relate.

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on Jul. 28 2010 at 7:22 pm
Cassiea. SILVER, Homestead, Florida
5 articles 1 photo 7 comments

Favorite Quote:
If I find in myself desires which nothing in this world can satisfy, the only logical explanation is that I was made for another world.
-C.S. Lewis

thank you for your support and constructive critiscm. i will view your work and let you know of what i think.

on Jul. 28 2010 at 2:19 pm
crubs33 DIAMOND, Lido Beach, New York
58 articles 3 photos 750 comments

Favorite Quote:
"The most courageous act is still to think for yourself. Aloud."- Coco Chanel
Life isn't about surviving the storm, it's about learning to dance in the rain.

This is so relatable for me.. amazing! This is so descriptive!!! i love it!!!! if you could please rate and comment on my work that would be great!!! thanks and ur really good!!!


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