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What Can I Do?

July 6, 2010
By Cassiea. SILVER, Homestead, Florida
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Cassiea. SILVER, Homestead, Florida
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Favorite Quote:
If I find in myself desires which nothing in this world can satisfy, the only logical explanation is that I was made for another world.
-C.S. Lewis

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You yell at me all the time.
when I try to do something
you yell at me for making a mess
even though I try to prevent it.
When I do nothing
not annoying anyone
not making a mess
you still yell at me
because I am not being productive.
What can I do without
you yelling at me?
What can I do?

© Grace L., Bacolod City, Philippines

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Cassiea. SILVER said...
on Jul. 28 2010 at 7:22 pm
Cassiea. SILVER, Homestead, Florida
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Favorite Quote:
If I find in myself desires which nothing in this world can satisfy, the only logical explanation is that I was made for another world.
-C.S. Lewis

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thank you for your support and constructive critiscm. i will view your work and let you know of what i think.
crubs33 DIAMOND said...
on Jul. 28 2010 at 2:19 pm
crubs33 DIAMOND, Lido Beach, New York
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"The most courageous act is still to think for yourself. Aloud."- Coco Chanel
Life isn't about surviving the storm, it's about learning to dance in the rain.

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This is so relatable for me.. amazing! This is so descriptive!!! i love it!!!! if you could please rate and comment on my work that would be great!!! thanks and ur really good!!!