IDK (I Dont Know) seeing Love

July 6, 2010
By trblue GOLD, Richmond, Virginia
trblue GOLD, Richmond, Virginia
14 articles 7 photos 141 comments

Favorite Quote:
"Too often we lose sight of life's simple pleasures. Remember, when someone annoys you, it takes 42 muscles in your face to frown. It only takes 4 muscles to extend your arm and slap that mother@#?!&* upside the head. "


As i walk around looking at
the sky thought my view finder.
something or someone catches
my big brown eyes.

i take your photo looking at it later in the night finding no flaws.
that take my heart away along with my breath.

I grow older still looking at that
photo. looking at those flawless flaws of yours, In eyes to your brow.

Untill one day I see you for what you R. A person with your flaws and all. I was shallow for look at your looks though my view finder.

that was all i was looking


The author's comments:
I making it up as i go while in class.
summer school.
i wrote something like this along time ago.

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trblue GOLD said...
on Jul. 18 2011 at 3:46 pm
trblue GOLD, Richmond, Virginia
14 articles 7 photos 141 comments

Favorite Quote:
"Too often we lose sight of life's simple pleasures. Remember, when someone annoys you, it takes 42 muscles in your face to frown. It only takes 4 muscles to extend your arm and slap that mother@#?!&* upside the head. "

thank you for your comments

on Jul. 28 2010 at 2:15 pm
crubs33 DIAMOND, Lido Beach, New York
58 articles 3 photos 750 comments

Favorite Quote:
"The most courageous act is still to think for yourself. Aloud."- Coco Chanel
Life isn't about surviving the storm, it's about learning to dance in the rain.

This is so descriptive!!! i love it!!!! if you could please rate and comment on my work that would be great!!! thanks and ur really good!!!


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