Savior of the Stars

July 6, 2010
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Compel the stars forth
An abundance of light set free
Collected together as one
They would present their advisable plea

Excuse their beauty at once
Ignore their joyful souls
Present them with a plan
They would agree to blatantly fall cold

Disguise your joy with anger
At what they had committed
A crime worthy of great danger
Every soul is now readmitted

No accidental assumptions
Of a greatness that lie beyond
False dreams sadly wished upon
A shooting star that once plunged on

Watchful eyes would pounce
Hopeful souls would soar
Now that the matter is flounced
Once again to the world of before

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crubs3 This work has been published in the Teen Ink monthly print magazine. said...
Jul. 28, 2010 at 2:11 pm
Wow i love this!! This is so descriptive!!! i love it!!!! if you could please rate and comment on my work that would be great!!! thanks and ur really good!!!
MercedesXO replied...
Jul. 28, 2010 at 3:11 pm
thanks a bunch, and sure ill deff check out your work!
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