July 6, 2010
By skatergirl13 PLATINUM, Woodbridge, Virginia
skatergirl13 PLATINUM, Woodbridge, Virginia
21 articles 0 photos 30 comments

Favorite Quote:
" your heart is the most valuable thing I have I don't want to lose it"

I waited and waited
I finally had you with me
I've loved you for so long
but now I don't
You hurt me
so now I'm done
so you might as well just leave
because I'm not coming back
If you want me
then come get me
prove you want to be with me
I was happy
but now I'm not
Now I'm saying goodbye

Similar Articles


This article has 3 comments.

on Jul. 30 2010 at 9:59 pm
Hannahgee6 BRONZE, Greensburg, Kentucky
1 article 0 photos 62 comments

Favorite Quote:
therefore do not worry about tomorrow. for tomorrow will worry about itself. each day has enough trouble of its own.

GREAT JOB!!!! :) iI absolutly LOVE this. 

plz look at my work...iI kinda neeD some feeDback. 

erikae GOLD said...
on Jul. 28 2010 at 9:26 pm
erikae GOLD, Brookfield, Wisconsin
19 articles 0 photos 24 comments
I can totally relate to this. Its beautiful. Great job. :)

on Jul. 28 2010 at 2:09 pm
crubs33 DIAMOND, Lido Beach, New York
58 articles 3 photos 750 comments

Favorite Quote:
"The most courageous act is still to think for yourself. Aloud."- Coco Chanel
Life isn't about surviving the storm, it's about learning to dance in the rain.

I lvoe this its so emotional!!!! if you could please rate and comment on my work that would be great!!! thanks and ur really good!!!

Swoon Reads

Aspiring Writer? Take Our Online Course!