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I waited and waited
I finally had you with me
I've loved you for so long
but now I don't
You hurt me
so now I'm done
so you might as well just leave
because I'm not coming back
If you want me
then come get me
prove you want to be with me
I was happy
but now I'm not
Now I'm saying goodbye



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justwannabemeThis teenager is a 'regular' and has contributed a lot of work, comments and/or forum posts, and has received many votes and high ratings over a long period of time. said...
Jul. 30, 2010 at 9:59 pm:

GREAT JOB!!!! :) iI absolutly LOVE this. 

plz look at my work...iI kinda neeD some feeDback. 

 
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erikae said...
Jul. 28, 2010 at 9:26 pm:
I can totally relate to this. Its beautiful. Great job. :)
 
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crubs3This teenager is a 'regular' and has contributed a lot of work, comments and/or forum posts, and has received many votes and high ratings over a long period of time. This work has been published in the Teen Ink monthly print magazine. said...
Jul. 28, 2010 at 2:09 pm:
I lvoe this its so emotional!!!! if you could please rate and comment on my work that would be great!!! thanks and ur really good!!!
 
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