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I hate you
But I hate me more
I understand you
For me, I am not quite sure
I feel your pain
And also my own
I lost your love
For you, mine has grown
I gave up on you
As well as myself
I cry for us both
I tread in self doubt
I yearn for you
You turn me away
You yearn for me
My heart is already grey.





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MariaMarie This work has been published in the Teen Ink monthly print magazine. said...
Aug. 6, 2010 at 9:51 pm
Very good, with a good meaning behind it
 
MercedesXO replied...
Aug. 12, 2010 at 11:43 pm
thanks babes:) i appriciate it.
 
Teardrops said...
Jul. 28, 2010 at 4:32 pm
Umm wow. This Is amazing. please post comments on my work
 
MercedesXO replied...
Jul. 29, 2010 at 11:34 am
Thank You!! and i will:)
 
crubs3 This work has been published in the Teen Ink monthly print magazine. said...
Jul. 28, 2010 at 2:05 pm
This is so amazing!!! i love it!!!! if you could please rate and comment on my work that would be great!!! thanks and ur really good!!!
 
MercedesXO replied...
Jul. 29, 2010 at 11:33 am
thanks a bunch!
 
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