Confessions

July 6, 2010
By MercedesXO DIAMOND, South Easton, Massachusetts
MercedesXO DIAMOND, South Easton, Massachusetts
52 articles 0 photos 280 comments

Favorite Quote:
"I realize that life is risks. It's acknowledging the past but looking forward. It's taking chances that we will make mistakes but believeing we all deserve to be forgiven."
-The Dead Tossed Waves.


I hate you
But I hate me more
I understand you
For me, I am not quite sure
I feel your pain
And also my own
I lost your love
For you, mine has grown
I gave up on you
As well as myself
I cry for us both
I tread in self doubt
I yearn for you
You turn me away
You yearn for me
My heart is already grey.


The author's comments:
Sometimes you love someone, but difficult matters tear you apart. You experience the harships of life, and you lose a sence of what really matters. Don't let that loved one go, even if at one time you both tearned eachother away.

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on Aug. 12 2010 at 11:43 pm
MercedesXO DIAMOND, South Easton, Massachusetts
52 articles 0 photos 280 comments

Favorite Quote:
"I realize that life is risks. It's acknowledging the past but looking forward. It's taking chances that we will make mistakes but believeing we all deserve to be forgiven."
-The Dead Tossed Waves.

thanks babes:) i appriciate it.

on Aug. 6 2010 at 9:51 pm
MariaMarie DIAMOND, Washington Court House, Ohio
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Favorite Quote:
"Life's a mountain on a beach"-Unknown
"Will: This is either madness or brilliance. Sparrow: It's remarkable how often those two traits coincide."-Pirates of the Caribbean:Curse of the Black Pearl.

Very good, with a good meaning behind it

on Jul. 29 2010 at 11:34 am
MercedesXO DIAMOND, South Easton, Massachusetts
52 articles 0 photos 280 comments

Favorite Quote:
"I realize that life is risks. It's acknowledging the past but looking forward. It's taking chances that we will make mistakes but believeing we all deserve to be forgiven."
-The Dead Tossed Waves.

Thank You!! and i will:)

on Jul. 29 2010 at 11:33 am
MercedesXO DIAMOND, South Easton, Massachusetts
52 articles 0 photos 280 comments

Favorite Quote:
"I realize that life is risks. It's acknowledging the past but looking forward. It's taking chances that we will make mistakes but believeing we all deserve to be forgiven."
-The Dead Tossed Waves.

thanks a bunch!

on Jul. 28 2010 at 4:32 pm
smilebright BRONZE, Las Vegas, Nevada
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"Your only in trouble if you get caught"- Aladdin

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on Jul. 28 2010 at 2:05 pm
crubs33 DIAMOND, Lido Beach, New York
58 articles 3 photos 750 comments

Favorite Quote:
"The most courageous act is still to think for yourself. Aloud."- Coco Chanel
Life isn't about surviving the storm, it's about learning to dance in the rain.

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