Should've Known

July 6, 2010
By ELM522 DIAMOND, Selden, New York
ELM522 DIAMOND, Selden, New York
79 articles 0 photos 139 comments

Favorite Quote:
"All those other girls, well they're beautiful, but would they write a song for you?"-"Hey Stephen" by Taylor Swift


I gazed into his deep blue eyes.
I was appalled to seek only lies.
He’d been an awesome magician,
Making everything perish, that was your only mission.

I was an easy culprit,
Being that I was naïve, and at times stupid.
Yet I don’t stand alone,
Plenty of others too, should’ve known.



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ELM522 DIAMOND said...
on Jul. 30 2010 at 9:34 pm
ELM522 DIAMOND, Selden, New York
79 articles 0 photos 139 comments

Favorite Quote:
"All those other girls, well they're beautiful, but would they write a song for you?"-"Hey Stephen" by Taylor Swift

thank you.

on Jul. 30 2010 at 9:01 pm
writingchick GOLD, Huntington, Indiana
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Favorite Quote:
"Faith is taking another step without seeing the entire staircase."

Love the first sentence :) very good

ELM522 DIAMOND said...
on Jul. 30 2010 at 2:28 pm
ELM522 DIAMOND, Selden, New York
79 articles 0 photos 139 comments

Favorite Quote:
"All those other girls, well they're beautiful, but would they write a song for you?"-"Hey Stephen" by Taylor Swift

Thanks, and of course I will!

on Jul. 30 2010 at 1:29 pm
Hannahgee6 BRONZE, Greensburg, Kentucky
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Favorite Quote:
therefore do not worry about tomorrow. for tomorrow will worry about itself. each day has enough trouble of its own.
-jesus

wow this is amazing. please keep writing. and comment on my work?? :) thank ya.

ELM522 DIAMOND said...
on Jul. 28 2010 at 4:24 pm
ELM522 DIAMOND, Selden, New York
79 articles 0 photos 139 comments

Favorite Quote:
"All those other girls, well they're beautiful, but would they write a song for you?"-"Hey Stephen" by Taylor Swift

Thanks, and I will.

on Jul. 28 2010 at 2:04 pm
crubs33 DIAMOND, Lido Beach, New York
58 articles 3 photos 750 comments

Favorite Quote:
"The most courageous act is still to think for yourself. Aloud."- Coco Chanel
Life isn't about surviving the storm, it's about learning to dance in the rain.

Everyone can so relate!! This is so descriptive!!! i love it!!!! if you could please rate and comment on my work that would be great!!! thanks and ur really good!!!




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