Should've Known

July 6, 2010
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I gazed into his deep blue eyes.
I was appalled to seek only lies.
He’d been an awesome magician,
Making everything perish, that was your only mission.

I was an easy culprit,
Being that I was naïve, and at times stupid.
Yet I don’t stand alone,
Plenty of others too, should’ve known.





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writingchick This work has been published in the Teen Ink monthly print magazine. said...
Jul. 30, 2010 at 9:01 pm
Love the first sentence :) very good
 
ELM522 This work has been published in the Teen Ink monthly print magazine. replied...
Jul. 30, 2010 at 9:34 pm
thank you.
 
justwannabeme said...
Jul. 30, 2010 at 1:29 pm
wow this is amazing. please keep writing. and comment on my work?? :) thank ya.
 
ELM522 This work has been published in the Teen Ink monthly print magazine. replied...
Jul. 30, 2010 at 2:28 pm
Thanks, and of course I will!
 
crubs3 This work has been published in the Teen Ink monthly print magazine. said...
Jul. 28, 2010 at 2:04 pm
Everyone can so relate!! This is so descriptive!!! i love it!!!! if you could please rate and comment on my work that would be great!!! thanks and ur really good!!!
 
ELM522 This work has been published in the Teen Ink monthly print magazine. replied...
Jul. 28, 2010 at 4:24 pm
Thanks, and I will.
 
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