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A river of peace
Is a river of love
It is a roller coaster of gratitude,
Laughter and joy.
A river of peace
Is beautiful
Diamonds sparkling in the sun
Millions upon millions
Consisting of happiness and fun.
A river of peace
Is consistent
It is the train
That carries me through my journey
Stretching on for miles and miles
Rippling over sediments and rocks
That remain determined in their place.
A river of peace
Is natural, casual yet invincible
A forever remaining beauty
Smooth and silky always on the run.





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crubs3 This work has been published in the Teen Ink monthly print magazine. said...
Jul. 28, 2010 at 2:03 pm
This is so amazing!!! i love it!!!! if you could please rate and comment on my work that would be great!!! thanks and ur really good!!!
 
Thesilentraven This work has been published in the Teen Ink monthly print magazine. said...
Jul. 28, 2010 at 10:25 am
This was a joy to read; it made me smile. There is nothing more satisfying to me than absolute peace, a river of peace.
 
MercedesXO replied...
Aug. 1, 2010 at 7:52 pm
really? thank you so much. that really means a lot to me, and i'm glad you liked it:) i'm gunna go check out your work! thanks again!
 
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