Angels of Beauty

July 6, 2010
By MercedesXO DIAMOND, South Easton, Massachusetts
MercedesXO DIAMOND, South Easton, Massachusetts
52 articles 0 photos 280 comments

Favorite Quote:
"I realize that life is risks. It's acknowledging the past but looking forward. It's taking chances that we will make mistakes but believeing we all deserve to be forgiven."
-The Dead Tossed Waves.


Oh white feathered beauties
Magical and invisible to the human eye
That bowed among the humans
And soothed the tears that cried
Your presence is sometimes forgotten
Yet still merrily seeked
Your purpose sometimes over exaggerated
To the deepest of all beliefs
Complicated lives seek your easiness
Confused hearts seek you love
Thankful minds seek your breeziness
Dying souls seek your dove
A faint hope of something greater
The comfortness needed to move on
You create theses ideas of longing
Sought after to process what lie beyond.



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on Aug. 1 2010 at 7:56 pm
MercedesXO DIAMOND, South Easton, Massachusetts
52 articles 0 photos 280 comments

Favorite Quote:
"I realize that life is risks. It's acknowledging the past but looking forward. It's taking chances that we will make mistakes but believeing we all deserve to be forgiven."
-The Dead Tossed Waves.

thanks so much! that means a lot to me, and i really appriciate it:)

on Aug. 1 2010 at 5:57 pm
OfficialApprover PLATINUM, Orefield, Pennsylvania
48 articles 0 photos 1754 comments

Favorite Quote:
Grab life by the balls. -Slobberknocker
We cannot change the cards we're dealt just how we play the hand
Experience is what you get when you didn't get what you wanted
It's pretty easy to be smart when you're parroting smart people
-Randy Pausch

This was beautiful! Great rhythm, flow, and rhyming.  I love your word choice.  Great job!

 

Btw, I'm going to comment on more of yours, I just can't comment on more right now.


on Aug. 1 2010 at 11:19 am
MercedesXO DIAMOND, South Easton, Massachusetts
52 articles 0 photos 280 comments

Favorite Quote:
"I realize that life is risks. It's acknowledging the past but looking forward. It's taking chances that we will make mistakes but believeing we all deserve to be forgiven."
-The Dead Tossed Waves.

thank you sooo much for all your nice comments:) i truly appriciate it and i'm very happy you like my work. that means a lot to me. i'll be sure to check out your work!

Miseltoe GOLD said...
on Jul. 31 2010 at 6:18 pm
Miseltoe GOLD, Boneville, Georgia
15 articles 2 photos 49 comments

Favorite Quote:
I'm a loser and I love to lose. Each time I lose its different, it teaches me something else... but winning loses its glamour after the first few times. so I love to lose

My fav. too =). the imagery, the rhymes, the wonder and truth it adds up and u portrays its beauty remarkably

on Jul. 29 2010 at 8:26 pm
MercedesXO DIAMOND, South Easton, Massachusetts
52 articles 0 photos 280 comments

Favorite Quote:
"I realize that life is risks. It's acknowledging the past but looking forward. It's taking chances that we will make mistakes but believeing we all deserve to be forgiven."
-The Dead Tossed Waves.

Thank you soooo much!! That honestly means so much to me, I'm really glad and appriciate you liking my work. And thanks for the rating as well! I'm happy you think I have good titles to my poems, thanks! And I love that you told me what your fav. line was. I like knowing what people specifically liked the best. thanks again:)

on Jul. 29 2010 at 8:24 pm
MercedesXO DIAMOND, South Easton, Massachusetts
52 articles 0 photos 280 comments

Favorite Quote:
"I realize that life is risks. It's acknowledging the past but looking forward. It's taking chances that we will make mistakes but believeing we all deserve to be forgiven."
-The Dead Tossed Waves.

thank you and i most certainly will!

on Jul. 29 2010 at 7:55 pm
despurlock DIAMOND, Morgantown, West Virginia
79 articles 0 photos 179 comments

Favorite Quote:
"The heart has its reasons which reason does not know." -Pascal, Pensees, 1670

I really love this poem! Again, you are very creative with your titles and that definately doesn't go unappreciated! I love this poem and I would have to say that y fave line is "Dying souls seek your mdove." Def. worth 5 stars and a fave :)

on Jul. 28 2010 at 2:02 pm
crubs33 DIAMOND, Lido Beach, New York
58 articles 3 photos 750 comments

Favorite Quote:
"The most courageous act is still to think for yourself. Aloud."- Coco Chanel
Life isn't about surviving the storm, it's about learning to dance in the rain.

This is so descriptive!!! i love it!!!! if you could please rate and comment on my work that would be great!!! thanks and ur really good!!!


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