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The built up of walls
Cautious steps
Fighting the uneven wrinkles
On my clothes
Perfection is the show
Is the performance I adore to show you?
The secrecy
Suddenly collapses since a month ago
Words spoken from you
Leads me to feel out of place
In this world
To know I’m insecure with the person
I live with twenty four seven
Spencer, you speak the truth
A fear to deserve more than a fling
A clear view of insecurity
Unknown of cherishing one person
More than a heart to beat
Afraid of love and pain
Elements I lived without for months
Neglecting my heart
To once fall for one person
Who’ll be my center of my world?





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LuvKirstyn14 said...
Aug. 3, 2010 at 12:18 am
i think this is great :)
 
asiangurl replied...
Aug. 3, 2010 at 10:00 am
awwww thank you very much
 
Egyptiangirl13 This work has been published in the Teen Ink monthly print magazine. said...
Aug. 1, 2010 at 9:26 am
Wow you did an awesome job with this:) i really, really like this. It had such a good structure! please check out some of my work if you get the chance:)
 
asiangurl replied...
Aug. 1, 2010 at 12:57 pm
awwwwww thank you..it mean alot but i will check out ur stuff. thankz:)
 
ChuzzyBear said...
Jul. 27, 2010 at 1:50 pm
I think you did an amazing job writing this
 
asiangurl replied...
Jul. 28, 2010 at 9:42 am
awwww thank you...ill really do mean it.
 
justwannabeme said...
Jul. 27, 2010 at 10:47 am
this is really good!!! please keep writing!! :) check out my work. :)b
 
asiangurl replied...
Jul. 28, 2010 at 9:43 am
awww thank you n i will:) it means alot
 
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