June 21, 2010
By sam013 DIAMOND, San Diego, California
sam013 DIAMOND, San Diego, California
63 articles 28 photos 33 comments

We are somewhat friends, you and me
My friends think we are meant to be
I do not think that I would mind
If in your heart, it is me you find
But the real me you have not seen

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on Aug. 31 2010 at 8:09 pm
Thesilentraven PLATINUM, Mableton, Georgia
40 articles 2 photos 1634 comments

Favorite Quote:
"il piu nell' uno," (according to Emerson, an Italian expression for beauty)

"Unable are the loved to die, for love is immortality" ~Emily Dickinson

"The deeper that sorrow carves into your being, the more joy you can contain"
~Kahlil Gibran

Very clever poem. I agree with 'Felicia,' for this poem says a lot with a brief selction of words. I love the first line, it sets the tone for the rest of the poem. Well done!

on Jul. 27 2010 at 5:45 pm
CourtneyLou BRONZE, SLIDELL, Louisiana
3 articles 0 photos 35 comments

Favorite Quote:
Some would rather be miserable then risk being happy ~Robert Anthony

This is pretty :)

Felicia GOLD said...
on Jul. 27 2010 at 8:44 am
Felicia GOLD, Chandler, Arizona
18 articles 0 photos 63 comments
its worth submitting 2x its really good and oyu said a lot with just a couple lines which is really hard to do and make it flow at the same time

sam013 DIAMOND said...
on Jul. 26 2010 at 10:50 pm
sam013 DIAMOND, San Diego, California
63 articles 28 photos 33 comments
oops already submitted this one. I thought I hadn't

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