We Die When The Clock Fades

July 6, 2010
By Boosflash DIAMOND, Jacksonville, Florida
Boosflash DIAMOND, Jacksonville, Florida
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Favorite Quote:
Get, Got, Gotten.


Suffering guilt pain and shame
Do the dirt then suffer the loss
Justify it then shift the blame
Then it will all become my fault

Draw away from me gradually
Built a barrier between us
don’t forget to change your story
don’t forget to point the finger.

You cling to hearts that are deep beneath
The homeland on which you’ve been walking
The truth never lies but never speaks
So let the tombstones do the talking

You could never write a rhyme like me
And I could never write like time vampire
But I’m a bit weary from years of no sleep
I hope you think of me in your darkest hour

This heart has never tasted love
So let this love our hearts devour
And if our time does not swallow
Then let us sink beneath our final hour.


The author's comments:
this is about a guy whos lost his love and he blames it on her but its not really her fault and he mourns for her miserably,or its about a couple in a catastrophic relationship and they know they're dying literally and figuratively but they dont care. they're watching themselves self destruct.

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on Aug. 2 2011 at 10:14 pm
Boosflash DIAMOND, Jacksonville, Florida
54 articles 0 photos 2066 comments

Favorite Quote:
Get, Got, Gotten.

well then, i think its time you introduce yourself, seeing as how I'll never meet you.

Aderes47 GOLD said...
on Aug. 1 2011 at 4:05 pm
Aderes47 GOLD, Cambridge, Massachusetts
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Favorite Quote:
You will find as you look back upon your life that the moments when you have truly lived are the moments when you have done things in the spirit of love.
Henry Drummond

Me? Normal? Ha Ha! 

I am not notmal at all! I sound normal on the internet but in reality... you have no idea the things that I do! 

You won't say that after you met me! 


on Jul. 31 2011 at 11:42 pm
Boosflash DIAMOND, Jacksonville, Florida
54 articles 0 photos 2066 comments

Favorite Quote:
Get, Got, Gotten.

you seem so normal. youre probrably the most normal person on here i ever commented with. 

whoa there...


Aderes47 GOLD said...
on Jul. 31 2011 at 9:14 pm
Aderes47 GOLD, Cambridge, Massachusetts
11 articles 0 photos 897 comments

Favorite Quote:
You will find as you look back upon your life that the moments when you have truly lived are the moments when you have done things in the spirit of love.
Henry Drummond

Yeah, I saw him commenting on another of your works so I kinda put two and two together. But thanks for telling me. :)

on Jul. 31 2011 at 6:50 pm
Boosflash DIAMOND, Jacksonville, Florida
54 articles 0 photos 2066 comments

Favorite Quote:
Get, Got, Gotten.

merci mercii merci. Timevampire is one of the authors on this site,i dedicated one to him and him to me.

Aderes47 GOLD said...
on Jul. 28 2011 at 10:10 pm
Aderes47 GOLD, Cambridge, Massachusetts
11 articles 0 photos 897 comments

Favorite Quote:
You will find as you look back upon your life that the moments when you have truly lived are the moments when you have done things in the spirit of love.
Henry Drummond

 I really, really, REALLY like most of the poem except the third stanza because of this line 

"And I could never write like time vampire/"

What does that mean? And what's a time vampire?

This feels like it should be from a perspective of a girl because for some reason, this poem reminds me of Adele. Do you like her music? I LOVE her music! 

 


on Sep. 24 2010 at 10:52 am
DreamWriter17 PLATINUM, Marengo, Indiana
34 articles 1 photo 682 comments

Favorite Quote:
learn from your past to live for the future.

You're welcome ^_^

on Sep. 23 2010 at 1:53 pm
Boosflash DIAMOND, Jacksonville, Florida
54 articles 0 photos 2066 comments

Favorite Quote:
Get, Got, Gotten.

merci captain. do it again.

on Sep. 22 2010 at 9:45 pm
DreamWriter17 PLATINUM, Marengo, Indiana
34 articles 1 photo 682 comments

Favorite Quote:
learn from your past to live for the future.

I liked it, too, it's amazing, as always!

on Aug. 20 2010 at 3:14 pm
Boosflash DIAMOND, Jacksonville, Florida
54 articles 0 photos 2066 comments

Favorite Quote:
Get, Got, Gotten.

thanks. thats really nice of you captain. i dedicate this to someone on teeinink,now that guy is good. honestly, you're one of the few people on here that are really really talented.do your dance captain.

on Aug. 20 2010 at 1:40 pm
Puff_the_dragon PLATINUM, Monroe, North Carolina
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Favorite Quote:
Love can be lost but it will never be forgotten

This is amazing, you're a good writer

on Jul. 28 2010 at 5:19 pm
Boosflash DIAMOND, Jacksonville, Florida
54 articles 0 photos 2066 comments

Favorite Quote:
Get, Got, Gotten.

and if our time does not swallow us. sorry.


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