Once upon a cold winters' day

June 15, 2010
By Rachel328 BRONZE, Commack, New York
Rachel328 BRONZE, Commack, New York
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A shiver
The breeze
A snowball
Coldness
My breath
Is what I feel.
"Duck!"
"Hide"
"Run"
"Missed!"
"Bull's eye!"
Is what I hear.
Snowballs flying
Children playing
Father shoveling
Snow whirling
Icicles growing
Is what I see.
Coolness
Dampness
Iciness
Weakness
Toughness
Is what I feel.
All on a cold winters' day.

The author's comments:
What inspired me for this piece was the amazing time I had on this day.

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