Teen Love is way too dramatic for me

June 15, 2010
By dontstop GOLD, Vriginville, Pennsylvania
dontstop GOLD, Vriginville, Pennsylvania
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Favorite Quote:
"You only get one chance to live your live do not mess it up"
"Ah Teen love, full of hope and happiness, but ignorant of reality"


I scan the old journals of which I wrote many sappy love poems.
I read the lines and roll my eyes.
These poems were all about my love.
I can't stand it.
I was depressed I couldn't see him for a while and a boy controlled my world.
I shouldn't be dependent like I was or am I like that now?
I'm annoyed at the girls who think boys are the greatest thing ever.
It confuses me to think about the strange way boys think about girls.
But then, that kind of turns me on.
If you like someone ask them
don't wait
like I did
you regret it
later.


The author's comments:
I wrote this poem on the spot it took me 10 minutes.
I think sometimes those poems are the best.

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dontstop GOLD said...
on Jul. 27 2010 at 3:16 pm
dontstop GOLD, Vriginville, Pennsylvania
10 articles 0 photos 5 comments

Favorite Quote:
"You only get one chance to live your live do not mess it up"
"Ah Teen love, full of hope and happiness, but ignorant of reality"

thanks i'm glad someone reads them :p

on Jul. 27 2010 at 1:55 pm
TessKnight SILVER, Atlantic Beach, Florida
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Favorite Quote:
"All that we see or seem/Is but a dream within a dream." -Edgar Allan Poe

Sooo true. Yeah thoses doppy girls drive me nuts as well. Totalli can relate. :) and great peom


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