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Sylvia
the jarring music
is only your harmony
is of yor own making
it's not here
it's in you


Sylvia
your bell jar
has finally descended
on you
you can only breathe
for three..two minutes now
after this
you are toast.



Sylvia
insanity of the world
has pushed you over the edge
it's not your own
madness we all have
you just feel it more




Sylvia
it breaks my heart
to watch you break like this..





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A_Dreamer said...
Jul. 26, 2010 at 6:34 pm:
I like how you're always focused on the subject. :) Good job.
 
yes_i_am This work has been published in the Teen Ink monthly print magazine. replied...
Jul. 27, 2010 at 5:48 am :
thank u dreamer ...makes me feel good
 
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OffMyRocker... said...
Jul. 26, 2010 at 2:08 pm:
I reallyl ike this. it makes me think of insanity slowly drifting in on you. I dont know if Im right or not thats just what I think of. Great job.
 
yes_i_am This work has been published in the Teen Ink monthly print magazine. replied...
Jul. 27, 2010 at 5:47 am :
thanks a lot..that is what i wanted it to depict..by the way i too am a big beatles' fan.. ;)
 
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