Near To Love, Far From Each Other

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Words don’t capture how I feel
About all the moments you made me smile
Lifting my eyes to something new
I never felt once before until now
The compliments given to me
Makes me want to kiss you over and over
While you are there in California
Fighting against everyone
And I’m at Wisconsin
Taking on lonely walks
Listening to music
Glistening rains that falls
Wishing you to be here with me
Hoping to meet you here to thee
One person who wants to be in your arms
The worsen inside of me locks in me
When I get lonely of missing your voice
Fallen out of place
When tears are not shy
And drops one by one
When I’m in bed
Wishing on one star
To lay next to you
To once feel your warmth by my side
Feel your every breath through my hair
As I lay on your stomach
Smiling for hours
I have no clue to put into words
But it’s the 3 words I once feared
Until you reopened my eyes
It’s the 8 simple letters
I love you





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GangstaEyes This work has been published in the Teen Ink monthly print magazine. said...
Aug. 3, 2010 at 2:39 pm
Wow wow wow - this totally captured my feelings about a similar distance problem... But my guys isn't as far as Cali :P Great stuff!
 
asiangurl replied...
Nov. 23, 2011 at 10:46 am
i know u commented a while ago but i didn't realieze you commented on one of my poems. i'm truly sorry. it's very not kind of me to do that to you. thank you so much. i'm reading my past poems and it touches me how the obstacles i conquered to be who i am. i'm glad you enjoyed it and hopefully you read my other new poems i have posted
 
LuvKirstyn14 said...
Aug. 3, 2010 at 12:21 am
great poem.. it tells a nice story :)
 
asiangurl replied...
Aug. 3, 2010 at 10:01 am
aww thank you, it means alot to me n my writings:)
 
Deiyjuan said...
Jul. 27, 2010 at 2:20 pm
Awww nice poem. There was a time I could relate to this, but I hope everything works out. Keep writting! =]
 
asiangurl replied...
Jul. 28, 2010 at 9:52 am
thank you very much...dont u worry i will continue writing:)
 
iWriteToExpressThouqhts said...
Jul. 26, 2010 at 8:40 pm
wow , omgosh this amazing ! I think every girl comes to a point in life when they feel this way . GREAT WORK ! :]
 
asiangurl replied...
Jul. 28, 2010 at 9:51 am
awwwww thank you for the comments, i wanna say it means alot for reals. i wanna let people know how i feel n hopefully can relate to. im glad ya did chica. thankz
 
stephiigiirl said...
Jul. 25, 2010 at 8:07 pm
oh wow, this is beautiful, and the same situation i am in..i live in new york, yet the kid im falling for lives in cali..
 
asiangurl replied...
Jul. 26, 2010 at 2:55 pm
awwwww thank you for tellin me u so could relate to me. i wanna say thank you:) i hope u n him will be together or hopefully see each other 
 
Thesilentraven This work has been published in the Teen Ink monthly print magazine. said...
Jul. 25, 2010 at 10:46 am
Beautifully written. The words seem really heartfelt. I hope that you and Joe end up together.
 
asiangurl replied...
Jul. 26, 2010 at 2:57 pm
thank you...but me n joe wouldn't end up together, it's not like im doubting but in my guts n in my heart i know dat becuz the age difference and i feel kinda scared if we do meet but thank you tho, it means alot.
 
silent_reader said...
Jul. 24, 2010 at 9:18 pm
very pretty
 
asiangurl replied...
Jul. 26, 2010 at 2:58 pm
thank you,it means alot
 
waywithwords said...
Jul. 24, 2010 at 9:14 pm
this is AWESOME!!! :)
 
asiangurl replied...
Jul. 26, 2010 at 2:58 pm
thank you very much....im happy you liked it.
 
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