Near To Love, Far From Each Other

July 22, 2010
By VickyLove92 PLATINUM, Green Bay, Wisconsin
VickyLove92 PLATINUM, Green Bay, Wisconsin
41 articles 0 photos 71 comments

Favorite Quote:
once life gets harsh/hard, hold your head strong because that's all you can do


Words don’t capture how I feel
About all the moments you made me smile
Lifting my eyes to something new
I never felt once before until now
The compliments given to me
Makes me want to kiss you over and over
While you are there in California
Fighting against everyone
And I’m at Wisconsin
Taking on lonely walks
Listening to music
Glistening rains that falls
Wishing you to be here with me
Hoping to meet you here to thee
One person who wants to be in your arms
The worsen inside of me locks in me
When I get lonely of missing your voice
Fallen out of place
When tears are not shy
And drops one by one
When I’m in bed
Wishing on one star
To lay next to you
To once feel your warmth by my side
Feel your every breath through my hair
As I lay on your stomach
Smiling for hours
I have no clue to put into words
But it’s the 3 words I once feared
Until you reopened my eyes
It’s the 8 simple letters
I love you


The author's comments:
this is about me and joe. he's in California and i'm at Wisconsin. We are not dating but i had fallen for him slowly. we both don't believe in long distance relationship but our feelings for one another are strong. as i love him

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on Nov. 23 2011 at 10:46 am
VickyLove92 PLATINUM, Green Bay, Wisconsin
41 articles 0 photos 71 comments

Favorite Quote:
once life gets harsh/hard, hold your head strong because that's all you can do

i know u commented a while ago but i didn't realieze you commented on one of my poems. i'm truly sorry. it's very not kind of me to do that to you. thank you so much. i'm reading my past poems and it touches me how the obstacles i conquered to be who i am. i'm glad you enjoyed it and hopefully you read my other new poems i have posted

on Aug. 3 2010 at 2:39 pm
Alcanno DIAMOND, Mexia, Texas
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Favorite Quote:
"If you love life, don't waste time, for time is what life is
made up of."

-- Bruce Lee

Wow wow wow - this totally captured my feelings about a similar distance problem... But my guys isn't as far as Cali :P Great stuff!

on Aug. 3 2010 at 10:01 am
VickyLove92 PLATINUM, Green Bay, Wisconsin
41 articles 0 photos 71 comments

Favorite Quote:
once life gets harsh/hard, hold your head strong because that's all you can do

aww thank you, it means alot to me n my writings:)

on Aug. 3 2010 at 12:21 am
KirstynAlexandra PLATINUM, Baltimore, Maryland
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Favorite Quote:
\"I\'m selfish, impatient and a little insecure. I make mistakes, I am out of control and at times hard to handle. But if you can\'t handle me at my worst, then you sure as hell don\'t deserve me at my best.\"
— Marilyn Monroe

Imagination is more important than knowledge...
Albert Einstein

great poem.. it tells a nice story :)

on Jul. 28 2010 at 9:52 am
VickyLove92 PLATINUM, Green Bay, Wisconsin
41 articles 0 photos 71 comments

Favorite Quote:
once life gets harsh/hard, hold your head strong because that's all you can do

thank you very much...dont u worry i will continue writing:)

on Jul. 28 2010 at 9:51 am
VickyLove92 PLATINUM, Green Bay, Wisconsin
41 articles 0 photos 71 comments

Favorite Quote:
once life gets harsh/hard, hold your head strong because that's all you can do

awwwww thank you for the comments, i wanna say it means alot for reals. i wanna let people know how i feel n hopefully can relate to. im glad ya did chica. thankz

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on Jul. 27 2010 at 2:20 pm
Deiyjuan GOLD, St. Petersburg, Florida
17 articles 0 photos 15 comments

Favorite Quote:
"Life is poetry, so the different experiences I go through in life are my poems." - Deiyjuan Christie

Awww nice poem. There was a time I could relate to this, but I hope everything works out. Keep writting! =]

on Jul. 26 2010 at 8:40 pm
ShenelleCrystal SILVER, M, New York
7 articles 0 photos 186 comments

Favorite Quote:
Laugh your heart out dance in the rain cherish the memories ignore the pain love + learn forget and forgive because remember you only have [one life to live] ♥

wow , omgosh this amazing ! I think every girl comes to a point in life when they feel this way . GREAT WORK ! :]

on Jul. 26 2010 at 2:58 pm
VickyLove92 PLATINUM, Green Bay, Wisconsin
41 articles 0 photos 71 comments

Favorite Quote:
once life gets harsh/hard, hold your head strong because that's all you can do

thank you,it means alot

on Jul. 26 2010 at 2:58 pm
VickyLove92 PLATINUM, Green Bay, Wisconsin
41 articles 0 photos 71 comments

Favorite Quote:
once life gets harsh/hard, hold your head strong because that's all you can do

thank you very much....im happy you liked it.

on Jul. 26 2010 at 2:57 pm
VickyLove92 PLATINUM, Green Bay, Wisconsin
41 articles 0 photos 71 comments

Favorite Quote:
once life gets harsh/hard, hold your head strong because that's all you can do

thank you...but me n joe wouldn't end up together, it's not like im doubting but in my guts n in my heart i know dat becuz the age difference and i feel kinda scared if we do meet but thank you tho, it means alot.

on Jul. 26 2010 at 2:55 pm
VickyLove92 PLATINUM, Green Bay, Wisconsin
41 articles 0 photos 71 comments

Favorite Quote:
once life gets harsh/hard, hold your head strong because that's all you can do

awwwww thank you for tellin me u so could relate to me. i wanna say thank you:) i hope u n him will be together or hopefully see each other 

on Jul. 25 2010 at 8:07 pm
stephiigiirl BRONZE, Fort Smith, Arkansas
4 articles 1 photo 4 comments

Favorite Quote:
Two roads diverged in a wood and I - I took the one less travelled by, And that has made all the difference.
- Robert Frost

Beauty is unbearable, drives us to despair, offering us for a minute the glimpse of an eternity that we should like to stretch out over the whole of time.
- Albert Camus

oh wow, this is beautiful, and the same situation i am in..i live in new york, yet the kid im falling for lives in cali..

on Jul. 25 2010 at 10:46 am
Thesilentraven PLATINUM, Mableton, Georgia
40 articles 2 photos 1634 comments

Favorite Quote:
"il piu nell' uno," (according to Emerson, an Italian expression for beauty)

"Unable are the loved to die, for love is immortality" ~Emily Dickinson

"The deeper that sorrow carves into your being, the more joy you can contain"
~Kahlil Gibran

Beautifully written. The words seem really heartfelt. I hope that you and Joe end up together.

on Jul. 24 2010 at 9:18 pm
silent_reader BRONZE, Columbia, Maryland
1 article 0 photos 41 comments

Favorite Quote:
"I cannot live without books." - Thomas Jefferson

very pretty

on Jul. 24 2010 at 9:14 pm
waywithwords GOLD, Forest Hill, Maryland
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Favorite Quote:
~~Isn't it funny how the most important things in life aren't things?~~

this is AWESOME!!! :)


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