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The stars in the sky,
Look like diamonds to some,
But to me,
They are different,
They are what they are,
They are burning,
They are dying,
They are far away,
Hidden by the darkness,
Unreachable,
Untouchable,
I am a star,
But I am not a diamond.




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Hummingbird This work has been published in the Teen Ink monthly print magazine. said...
Oct. 19, 2010 at 3:32 pm:
This poem is sooooo beautiful!!!! I especially like the ending. You are a really gifted writer and I will definitely check out your other work!! do you think you could check mine out?
 
Hummingbird This work has been published in the Teen Ink monthly print magazine. replied...
Oct. 19, 2010 at 3:32 pm :
Oh yeah- I give you five stars!
 
mwahxandxmwa replied...
Oct. 21, 2010 at 6:31 am :
Oh my goshh thank you so much.  And of course i will check out your work. And thank-you soo much again. Mwah :D
 
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kmarie14 said...
Oct. 18, 2010 at 9:29 pm:
amazing. enough said(: keep posting i love your work, check out mine if you get time?? :) thnx for postin:)
 
mwahxandxmwa replied...
Oct. 18, 2010 at 11:28 pm :
THANK YOUUUUU sooo much i cant believe youu favourited this...gahhh yayyyy *insert completely un-co-ordinated dancing and jumping that makes me look like a jelly fish* mwah mwah mwah mwah mwah mwah mwah!!!!!!!!
 
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katielynn21 said...
Sept. 8, 2010 at 1:12 pm:
Awww i really like this:) keep up the good work:)
 
mwahxandxmwa replied...
Oct. 18, 2010 at 5:55 pm :
Thank you verry much..i am extremely sorry that i didnt reply earlier!! Its official computers are starting a vendetta against me!!! mwah :D
 
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