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Lies.

She always falls so hard,
Her eyes remained closed.
The boy never catches her,
Its always candid, never posed.


Her heart is real,
And her feelings true.
She continues to get walked on,
Its something she forgets but always knew.


Amiable and optimistic,
She has set goals.
She wants to go far in life,
She fights with all her soul.


Broken promises,
And words left unspoken.
These are the things,
That leave the wounds so open.


A smile is there,
To conceal the pain.
The boy who played her,
Thought it was one big game.


He told lies,
And made her be[lie]ve.
He conceived many promises,
This girl was anything but relieved.


A promise of forever,
A ring on her finger.
He lead her on,
And left the pain to linger.


She had so much to offer,
So much love to give.
She wasn't good enough for him,
This is the one mistake he will soon have to live.


He never knew,
What was right in front of him.
Its like the lights went down,
And everything went dim.


She couldn't offer him sex,
So he went off to find it else where.
The pain is just to much,
And he doesn't even care.


I know how it feels Young Girl,
To not be wanted.
Hes permanently on your mind,
Its the memories that are haunted.


I'm tired of boys,
Thinking with the wrong head.
They need to grow up and mature,
And be a man instead.


I finally got closure,
But its not the answer I wanted to hear.
I wanted him to love me,
I wanted him to reappear.


I know now,
God has someone better planned for me.
A real man,
Who knows exactly what he wants to be.



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Sencere said...
Aug. 9, 2010 at 8:56 am:
can you check out my poems and comment
 
wild18 replied...
Aug. 9, 2010 at 9:29 am :
sure! 
 
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bbygurl21 said...
Jul. 31, 2010 at 4:54 pm:
i am going 2 give u 5 stars
 
wild18 replied...
Aug. 1, 2010 at 8:05 pm :
thank youu!!
 
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optimisticpessimist said...
Jul. 26, 2010 at 5:06 pm:
This poem was beautifully written. I love how evrything flows ;)   I'd like it if you guys would check out my work. I appreciate it.
 
wild18 replied...
Jul. 26, 2010 at 5:43 pm :
thank you :)) 
 
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renni said...
Jul. 26, 2010 at 10:54 am:

this was beautiful so much emotion i loved it i give it 5 stars

plz check out some of my work

 
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stephiigiirl said...
Jul. 25, 2010 at 8:13 pm:

this is beautiful, my feelings almost exactly

"Hes permanently on your mind,
Its the memories that are haunted."

i give you 5stars, this moved me so much.

check out some of my work =]

 
wild18 replied...
Jul. 25, 2010 at 9:35 pm :

Thank you so much!

i really hope the things i went through can touch people. Thank you so much. <3 

 
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BaileyBaby13 said...
Jul. 25, 2010 at 4:01 pm:
Wow, this really moved me. Amazing job. 5 stars,(:
 
wild18 replied...
Jul. 25, 2010 at 9:36 pm :
thank you, so so much. (:
 
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asocialcat said...
Jul. 25, 2010 at 2:51 pm:

This is beautiful. I truly love it.

One grammatical point to address: "its" is a possessive adjective whereas "it's" is the contraction of "it is". This is a common mistake. Keep this rule in mind when you are writing your poems.

 
wild18 replied...
Jul. 25, 2010 at 9:40 pm :

thank you :)

i always forget that. I'm surprised i passed english :p 

 
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Squirt21 said...
Jul. 25, 2010 at 1:13 pm:
that was very good.
 
wild18 replied...
Jul. 25, 2010 at 9:40 pm :
thank you so much :) 
 
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silent_reader said...
Jul. 24, 2010 at 9:15 pm:
very good and true
 
wild18 replied...
Jul. 25, 2010 at 9:41 pm :
thank you :) 
 
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LadyMoon said...
Jul. 24, 2010 at 9:12 pm:
OMFG!!!this poem is amazing....I loved it!I kinda went through a tough relationship myself recently and this poem really speaks to me.Thanx :)
 
wild18 replied...
Jul. 25, 2010 at 9:41 pm :

I'm so glad i could help.

Your not alone <3 

 
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faeriesdescending44 said...
Jul. 23, 2010 at 9:52 pm:
loved it! your capturing a lot of girl's hearts with thoughts and emotions we couldn't put into words ourselves!
 
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