Who Am I?

June 30, 2010
By crubs33 DIAMOND, Lido Beach, New York
crubs33 DIAMOND, Lido Beach, New York
58 articles 3 photos 750 comments

Favorite Quote:
"The most courageous act is still to think for yourself. Aloud."- Coco Chanel
Life isn't about surviving the storm, it's about learning to dance in the rain.


The words are there written,
In font one size small,
And yet my set brain does not,
Get them at all.

For how does one answer,
A question so broad,
When to have ingrained morals,
Is to have ingrained flaws.



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on Jan. 28 2012 at 9:59 am
HinataHyuga SILVER, Philadelphia, Pennsylvania
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Favorite Quote:
To never give up is my nindo, my ninja way. I can't run before taking my first step. A place to return to is were someone always thinks of you. Naruto-kun. Miso ramen. Back off kushina tomato Minato is mine! Kingmortha is my BFFFFF on teenink!

THAT WAS SO CUTE!

on Jan. 28 2012 at 7:36 am
laurensoccer SILVER, Palm Beach Gardens, Florida
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This poem is amazing. You used each word beautifully to convey your idea. Thank you so much for posting your work. I would really appreciate it if you could check out some of my work. Keep writing!!!!!!!!

on Jan. 28 2012 at 12:14 am
Zaid1315 SILVER, Farmington, New Mexico
7 articles 0 photos 15 comments

Favorite Quote:
"No matter where life takes me find me with a smile" -Mac Miller

Very short, but makes total sense! Deserves 5 stars...*rates 5*

secrets said...
on Mar. 26 2011 at 10:24 pm
Ur poem means something to me that u cant even understand!!!! thank u soo much for writin it i feel like it waz written just for me thank u for writin that it mean the world to me

on Feb. 16 2011 at 1:32 pm
far.from.you. GOLD, Bradenton, Florida
17 articles 0 photos 50 comments

Favorite Quote:
" She completly fell for him, but he didnt even stumble...</3" -unknown.

OMG, this is amazing..(:

Nyrihaz said...
on Nov. 29 2010 at 8:51 am
Nyrihaz, Isabela, Other
0 articles 0 photos 24 comments

Favorite Quote:
"Listen to the screams a silent room makes"

Your poem hides a clean, real beauty that sometimes is hard to find on short poems. The deepness to it impresses me as well. “…in font one size small…” was an impressive detail to the poem. Lines like that—sharp—get the point across.

“When to have ingrained morals is to have ingrained flaws.” Good question; I don’t wonder indeed.


on Aug. 28 2010 at 3:43 am
crubs33 DIAMOND, Lido Beach, New York
58 articles 3 photos 750 comments

Favorite Quote:
"The most courageous act is still to think for yourself. Aloud."- Coco Chanel
Life isn't about surviving the storm, it's about learning to dance in the rain.

Thanks!!!     

on Aug. 20 2010 at 12:12 pm
Calamine16 GOLD, Rochester, Minnesota
18 articles 0 photos 17 comments

Favorite Quote:
"Ordinary people can do extraordinary things if given a chance" ~R. Limbaugh~
Heaven is like Hawaii. I haven't been there yet.

~Michelle~

great writing- all of yours :) I throuroughly enjoyed them- thank you for asking me to read your work and...thanks for reading mine as well. I really appreciate it.

on Aug. 19 2010 at 12:36 pm
crubs33 DIAMOND, Lido Beach, New York
58 articles 3 photos 750 comments

Favorite Quote:
"The most courageous act is still to think for yourself. Aloud."- Coco Chanel
Life isn't about surviving the storm, it's about learning to dance in the rain.

Thankyou!!!

on Aug. 19 2010 at 12:35 pm
crubs33 DIAMOND, Lido Beach, New York
58 articles 3 photos 750 comments

Favorite Quote:
"The most courageous act is still to think for yourself. Aloud."- Coco Chanel
Life isn't about surviving the storm, it's about learning to dance in the rain.

Thanks!!      

Najima SILVER said...
on Aug. 18 2010 at 10:42 pm
Najima SILVER, Oregon, Ohio
5 articles 0 photos 3 comments

Favorite Quote:
"Shh...they're arguing...I wanna listen"

It short, but it makes you think. Get's right to the point kind of.

on Aug. 18 2010 at 10:30 pm
liv.laf.love13 SILVER, El Paso, Texas
5 articles 0 photos 24 comments

Favorite Quote:
MUSIC IS THE CURE!!

omg its beautiful short and sweet!

on Aug. 18 2010 at 9:56 pm
crubs33 DIAMOND, Lido Beach, New York
58 articles 3 photos 750 comments

Favorite Quote:
"The most courageous act is still to think for yourself. Aloud."- Coco Chanel
Life isn't about surviving the storm, it's about learning to dance in the rain.

Thanks so much!!

on Aug. 18 2010 at 7:37 pm
Escritoria BRONZE, Sugar Land, Texas
1 article 0 photos 1 comment
I love this poem!! You commented on my work and asked me to look at yours and I'm glad I did!! =]

on Aug. 18 2010 at 6:18 pm
crubs33 DIAMOND, Lido Beach, New York
58 articles 3 photos 750 comments

Favorite Quote:
"The most courageous act is still to think for yourself. Aloud."- Coco Chanel
Life isn't about surviving the storm, it's about learning to dance in the rain.

Thanks so much!!

on Aug. 18 2010 at 4:10 pm
silent_reader BRONZE, Columbia, Maryland
1 article 0 photos 41 comments

Favorite Quote:
"I cannot live without books." - Thomas Jefferson

wonderful!

on Aug. 16 2010 at 6:36 pm
crubs33 DIAMOND, Lido Beach, New York
58 articles 3 photos 750 comments

Favorite Quote:
"The most courageous act is still to think for yourself. Aloud."- Coco Chanel
Life isn't about surviving the storm, it's about learning to dance in the rain.

Thanks so mcuh!!!

shocking. GOLD said...
on Aug. 13 2010 at 12:37 pm
shocking. GOLD, West Bloomfield, Michigan
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this is really great! keep writing!

on Aug. 11 2010 at 4:31 pm
crubs33 DIAMOND, Lido Beach, New York
58 articles 3 photos 750 comments

Favorite Quote:
"The most courageous act is still to think for yourself. Aloud."- Coco Chanel
Life isn't about surviving the storm, it's about learning to dance in the rain.

Thanks!!         

on Aug. 11 2010 at 4:31 pm
crubs33 DIAMOND, Lido Beach, New York
58 articles 3 photos 750 comments

Favorite Quote:
"The most courageous act is still to think for yourself. Aloud."- Coco Chanel
Life isn't about surviving the storm, it's about learning to dance in the rain.

Thanks!!!    




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