"Blue"

June 29, 2010
By Danielle123 SILVER, Long Island, New York
Danielle123 SILVER, Long Island, New York
6 articles 1 photo 3 comments

Favorite Quote:
"To live a creative live, we must lose our fear of being wrong."


I miss the colors of the world
Yet I know it from past
The sky sits with vivid blues
And the grass flowers with many greens
But I no longer see them
I wait for these colors, like a child waiting to grow
Not always do I see gray
But I see them, I see the colors
They come in bursts
Burnt orangey-reds
And yellows like fruit
Oh, how I miss these colors


The author's comments:
Originally, this piece was written for my Creative Writing class, but I decided that I wanted to share it with the online community that is teenink.

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on Jul. 23 2010 at 10:33 am
Danielle123 SILVER, Long Island, New York
6 articles 1 photo 3 comments

Favorite Quote:
"To live a creative live, we must lose our fear of being wrong."

Thanks so much! I will definitely check out some of your work! :)

on Jul. 23 2010 at 12:30 am
crubs33 DIAMOND, Lido Beach, New York
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Favorite Quote:
"The most courageous act is still to think for yourself. Aloud."- Coco Chanel
Life isn't about surviving the storm, it's about learning to dance in the rain.

Omg i love this!! its so descriptive and has such great vocab!! if you could please rate and comment on my work that wuld be awesome!!! especially to anonymous!!! thanks and ur really good!!!


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