It Hurts

June 29, 2010
By , Middle of Nowhere, VT
It hurts to move

Every step I take is agony

Slowly

I painfully move my limbs

It hurts

But I keep walking

In agony

It hurts to move

This torture is almost

Too much to endure

This suffering

This pain

It hurts to move

It hurts to walk

Away





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crubs3 This work has been published in the Teen Ink monthly print magazine. said...
Jul. 23, 2010 at 12:30 am
wow i love teh emotion!! so powerful!! if you could please rate and comment on my work that wuld be awesome!!! especially to anonymous!!! thanks and ur really good!!!
 
KatiKat replied...
Jul. 23, 2010 at 10:29 am
Nooo I accidentally made it anonymous???? Well anyway it was me to anyone who wants to know :) Thanks crubs3! I'm on my way to your work (:
 
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