I love you

June 29, 2010
By Tiffany_Avalos GOLD, Lorain, Ohio
Tiffany_Avalos GOLD, Lorain, Ohio
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Favorite Quote:
"LIfe is worth a few bumps and brusies."


My heart longs for you,
Even when you are six-feet under,
I have seen your grave and whisper,
These gentle words,
I cry over your looks,
Knowing I won't see them,
I prey for your return,
I overcome nothing when I think of you,
My grief last over time,
No new love can enter,
I will never forget your touch,
Nor your smile,
I will never forget you at all,
I will just say these words repeatedly,
Until I am at peace with you at last.

The author's comments:
I wrote this for someone you lost there loved one. I'm sorry.

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on Jul. 23 2010 at 11:29 am
Lovebug07 PLATINUM, Topeka, Kansas
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Laughter is a tranquilizer with no side effects. - Arnold Glasow

Your very welcome! Keep up the wonderful job!!! :)

on Jul. 23 2010 at 11:24 am
Tiffany_Avalos GOLD, Lorain, Ohio
14 articles 0 photos 9 comments

Favorite Quote:
"LIfe is worth a few bumps and brusies."

thank you so much!!!! :)

on Jul. 23 2010 at 12:13 am
crubs33 DIAMOND, Lido Beach, New York
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"The most courageous act is still to think for yourself. Aloud."- Coco Chanel
Life isn't about surviving the storm, it's about learning to dance in the rain.

OMg this is so powerful... i love the emotion!!! if you could please rate and comment on my work that wuld be awesome!!! especially to anonymous!!! thanks and ur really good!!!

on Jul. 22 2010 at 4:19 pm
Lovebug07 PLATINUM, Topeka, Kansas
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Favorite Quote:
Laughter is a tranquilizer with no side effects. - Arnold Glasow

This is really good!!! It has so much emotion... FANTASTIC!!! :)




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