I love you

My heart longs for you,
Even when you are six-feet under,
I have seen your grave and whisper,
These gentle words,
I cry over your looks,
Knowing I won't see them,
I prey for your return,
I overcome nothing when I think of you,
My grief last over time,
No new love can enter,
I will never forget your touch,
Nor your smile,
I will never forget you at all,
I will just say these words repeatedly,
Until I am at peace with you at last.





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crubs3 This work has been published in the Teen Ink monthly print magazine. said...
Jul. 23, 2010 at 12:13 am
OMg this is so powerful... i love the emotion!!! if you could please rate and comment on my work that wuld be awesome!!! especially to anonymous!!! thanks and ur really good!!!
 
Lovebug07 said...
Jul. 22, 2010 at 4:19 pm
This is really good!!! It has so much emotion... FANTASTIC!!! :)
 
Tonni replied...
Jul. 23, 2010 at 11:24 am
thank you so much!!!! :)
 
Lovebug07 replied...
Jul. 23, 2010 at 11:29 am
Your very welcome! Keep up the wonderful job!!! :)
 
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