Emptiness

June 29, 2010
By Nikki_G GOLD, Marlborough, Massachusetts
Nikki_G GOLD, Marlborough, Massachusetts
13 articles 0 photos 46 comments

When I'm with you
in your arms
I can't help but
smile

But when I get up
and
walk away
I can't help but
feel
as though something
is missing

I miss you

I love you.


The author's comments:
This poem brought about the feelings I felt when I was with a special person, and the emptiness I felt when I had to leave them...

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Nikki_G GOLD said...
on Jul. 23 2010 at 8:06 am
Nikki_G GOLD, Marlborough, Massachusetts
13 articles 0 photos 46 comments
haha thanks! and yes, i'll look at your work :)

on Jul. 23 2010 at 12:12 am
crubs33 DIAMOND, Lido Beach, New York
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Favorite Quote:
"The most courageous act is still to think for yourself. Aloud."- Coco Chanel
Life isn't about surviving the storm, it's about learning to dance in the rain.

Aww :( omg i love this poem tho!! really great!! if you could please rate and comment on my work that wuld be awesome!!! especially to anonymous!!! thanks and ur really good!!!


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