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When I'm with you
in your arms
I can't help but
smile

But when I get up
and
walk away
I can't help but
feel
as though something
is missing

I miss you

I love you.





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crubs3 This work has been published in the Teen Ink monthly print magazine. said...
Jul. 23, 2010 at 12:12 am
Aww :( omg i love this poem tho!! really great!! if you could please rate and comment on my work that wuld be awesome!!! especially to anonymous!!! thanks and ur really good!!!
 
NikkiG replied...
Jul. 23, 2010 at 8:06 am
haha thanks! and yes, i'll look at your work :)
 
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