The Finial Battle Has Been Fought

June 29, 2010
By Zzzie SILVER, North Canton, Ohio
Zzzie SILVER, North Canton, Ohio
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Favorite Quote:
"Think positive, or I'll have to start singing."


The finial battle has been fought.
As I stand there deep in thought,
Tears are rolling down my face,
Enemies claiming my home their place.

I am forced to flee, to run away
From everything that has happened today.
To find new friends, new home, new life,
To forget all present feelings of strife.

Hear me enemies, hear me clear,
I will not forget what happened here.
I will avenge my home, my family, my friends.
I swear, you will meet your ends.

The finial battle has not been fought.
When I return you will be taught
To never take my friends from me,
To never harm my family.
So, celebrate, dance, have fun.
Although this battle has been won,
My revenge will be fulfilled,
And anyone who stands in my way will be killed.



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Zzzie SILVER said...
on Aug. 3 2010 at 7:10 pm
Zzzie SILVER, North Canton, Ohio
8 articles 0 photos 38 comments

Favorite Quote:
"Think positive, or I'll have to start singing."

Thanks to both of you! :)

PC0916 BRONZE said...
on Jul. 24 2010 at 2:11 am
PC0916 BRONZE, Neskowin, Oregon
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Favorite Quote:
"Women are brain ninjas!" -Dane Cook

Nice work!!

on Jul. 23 2010 at 12:07 am
crubs33 DIAMOND, Lido Beach, New York
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Favorite Quote:
"The most courageous act is still to think for yourself. Aloud."- Coco Chanel
Life isn't about surviving the storm, it's about learning to dance in the rain.

Wow powerful!!! love it!! if you could please rate and comment on my work that wuld be awesome!!! especially to anonymous!!! thanks and ur really good!!!




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