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Goodbye.

By , Enumclaw, WA
She smiles;
your whole being illuminates with it.
She waves;
it means so much more than hello.
She laughs;
and it seems
that dumb joke is so funny.
If it's all a big lie,
I would've never known.
She cries;
you break down at the sight of her tears.
She screams;
you feel the hurt deep in your soul.
She picks up the gun,
it's so cold against pale skin.
She pulls the trigger.
You'll never let go.





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gymbabe This work has been published in the Teen Ink monthly print magazine. said...
Jul. 19, 2010 at 6:36 pm
Wow...that was so amazing.  Sad, beautiful, and emotional, perfectly worded and described. Just WOW!
 
BaileyBaby13 replied...
Jul. 20, 2010 at 4:08 pm
....thank you so much,(:
 
gymbabe This work has been published in the Teen Ink monthly print magazine. replied...
Jul. 20, 2010 at 4:16 pm
No problem:)
 
BaileyBaby13 said...
Jul. 19, 2010 at 6:20 pm
By the way, anyone who reads this. I guess I accidentally hit Anonymous but it's by me,(:
 
Chelz said...
Jul. 18, 2010 at 11:16 pm
This poem is deep and you just inspired me to write a poem
 
BaileyBaby13 replied...
Jul. 19, 2010 at 6:12 pm
Thank you,(: I'm so glad I inspired you.
 
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