Emotions

July 12, 2010
By JSkeletonRocks PLATINUM, Longmont, Colorado
JSkeletonRocks PLATINUM, Longmont, Colorado
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Favorite Quote:
"Your mind is like a parachute, it doesn't work unless it's open."
-Frank Zappa


I cry when I feel ugly
I laugh when I'm pretty
I'm silent when I desire
I talk when I'm angry
Why is it...
That ever emotion comes with an action


The author's comments:
I wrote this piece after having been mad at my older sister and mad at myself.

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on Jul. 20 2010 at 1:47 pm
Collado92 PLATINUM, Ft.pierce, Florida
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I like this and yeah why does every emtion come with an action? 

Please check out some of work and let me know what you think.


on Jul. 19 2010 at 7:54 pm
JSkeletonRocks PLATINUM, Longmont, Colorado
28 articles 0 photos 20 comments

Favorite Quote:
"Your mind is like a parachute, it doesn't work unless it's open."
-Frank Zappa

thank you! I read to Anonymous, commented too, it was really good! you felt something when you read it! It was simply great!

on Jul. 19 2010 at 5:22 pm
crubs33 DIAMOND, Lido Beach, New York
58 articles 3 photos 750 comments

Favorite Quote:
"The most courageous act is still to think for yourself. Aloud."- Coco Chanel
Life isn't about surviving the storm, it's about learning to dance in the rain.

I really liked this!!!! its so deep!! if you could please comment and rate my work that would be great!! especially to anonymous!!!! thanx and ur really good!!!!

on Jul. 19 2010 at 12:11 pm
this was short, but really good. very true. it connects with just about everyone which is why it's so great.

on Jul. 19 2010 at 10:45 am
JSkeletonRocks PLATINUM, Longmont, Colorado
28 articles 0 photos 20 comments

Favorite Quote:
"Your mind is like a parachute, it doesn't work unless it's open."
-Frank Zappa

Thank you! And no, I'm not mad anymore! :)

on Jul. 18 2010 at 7:30 pm
Thesilentraven PLATINUM, Mableton, Georgia
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Favorite Quote:
"il piu nell' uno," (according to Emerson, an Italian expression for beauty)

"Unable are the loved to die, for love is immortality" ~Emily Dickinson

"The deeper that sorrow carves into your being, the more joy you can contain"
~Kahlil Gibran

This poem is short, but it says a lot about emotion. Thank you for writing it, and I hope that you are no longer mad at your sister or yourself!




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