United As One

June 18, 2010
Smooth and full of youth are the young child’s hands

Inexperienced and not yet tested to completion

Full of valor yet empty of trait

But the elderly hands tell a story of the past

The lines are experience

They are empty of youth but so full of life

There will be peace once

The hands of the child

And the hands of the elderly

Are united

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Thesilentraven This work has been published in the Teen Ink monthly print magazine. said...
Aug. 27, 2010 at 6:37 pm
Very true, and quite a lovely poem. It made me very happy, so thanks for writing it.
MidnightAngel7 replied...
Aug. 27, 2010 at 6:39 pm
Thank you so much!
MidnightAngel7 said...
Jul. 21, 2010 at 9:08 pm
Thank you!
LoveLikeWoe said...
Jul. 21, 2010 at 4:47 pm
Love this!
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