Love Hate

June 17, 2010
By Sania GOLD, Aroura, Colorado
Sania GOLD, Aroura, Colorado
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1)I told you
2)I love you
3)When I see you
4)my heart beats faster
5)you make me happy all the time
6)Every tim you talk
7)You force me into your world
8)You bring me higher up
9)Every time,
10)You fix my heart

Love ?


Hate ?

:[ 10)you destroy my heart,
9)Every time
8)You bring me lower down
7)You force me out of your world
6)Every time you talk,
5)You make me cry all the time
4)My heart breaks faster,
3)When I see you
2)I love you
1)I told you

The author's comments:
I loved how this girl made her poem in this writing form so I made hers my mentor text. Hers is called: Secret

Love hate like black and white (picture) ;]

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on Jul. 15 2010 at 12:27 am
crubs33 DIAMOND, Lido Beach, New York
58 articles 3 photos 750 comments

Favorite Quote:
"The most courageous act is still to think for yourself. Aloud."- Coco Chanel
Life isn't about surviving the storm, it's about learning to dance in the rain.

This is really good!! i can feel the emotion!!! if you could please rate and comment my work that would be great!! thanks and u r really good dont stop!!!

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