June 19, 2010
It breathes life into you,
makes your chest fall and rise rhythmically.
It creates your shape and curvature,
allows you to flow into countless minds and souls.
It is the faucet of your being,
the food to your hunger,
the water to your thirst.
It is who you are.
It is my pain.
It is my poem.

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crubs3 This work has been published in the Teen Ink monthly print magazine. said...
Jul. 15, 2010 at 12:04 am
This is really good!! i can feel the emotion!!! if you could please rate and comment my work that would be great!! thanks and u r really good dont stop!!!
poetrynerd24 replied...
Jul. 15, 2010 at 10:45 pm
thanks you! i'll totally check out your work. rate and comment some new stuff i'm going to submit this week.
Dominicangirl said...
Jul. 13, 2010 at 11:49 am
REally really good, keep it up :), and maybe check out my work?
poetrynerd24 replied...
Jul. 15, 2010 at 10:42 pm
thank you! i'll check out your work
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