Inspiration

June 19, 2010
By silenthinker BRONZE, Woodbury, Minnesota
silenthinker BRONZE, Woodbury, Minnesota
3 articles 1 photo 4 comments

Favorite Quote:
Is encouragement what the poet needs? Open Question. Maybe he needs discouragement. In fact, quite a few of them need more discouragement, the most discouragement possible. -Robert Fitzgerald


It breathes life into you,
makes your chest fall and rise rhythmically.
It creates your shape and curvature,
allows you to flow into countless minds and souls.
It is the faucet of your being,
the food to your hunger,
the water to your thirst.
It is who you are.
It is my pain.
It is my poem.

The author's comments:
Just something I randomly wrote one day...

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on Jul. 15 2010 at 10:45 pm
silenthinker BRONZE, Woodbury, Minnesota
3 articles 1 photo 4 comments

Favorite Quote:
Is encouragement what the poet needs? Open Question. Maybe he needs discouragement. In fact, quite a few of them need more discouragement, the most discouragement possible. -Robert Fitzgerald

thanks you! i'll totally check out your work. rate and comment some new stuff i'm going to submit this week.

on Jul. 15 2010 at 10:42 pm
silenthinker BRONZE, Woodbury, Minnesota
3 articles 1 photo 4 comments

Favorite Quote:
Is encouragement what the poet needs? Open Question. Maybe he needs discouragement. In fact, quite a few of them need more discouragement, the most discouragement possible. -Robert Fitzgerald

thank you! i'll check out your work

on Jul. 15 2010 at 12:04 am
crubs33 DIAMOND, Lido Beach, New York
58 articles 3 photos 750 comments

Favorite Quote:
"The most courageous act is still to think for yourself. Aloud."- Coco Chanel
Life isn't about surviving the storm, it's about learning to dance in the rain.

This is really good!! i can feel the emotion!!! if you could please rate and comment my work that would be great!! thanks and u r really good dont stop!!!

on Jul. 13 2010 at 11:49 am
Sileron-evol PLATINUM, Providence, Rhode Island
44 articles 0 photos 98 comments

Favorite Quote:
"we are captives of our own identities, living in prisons of our own creation"

REally really good, keep it up :), and maybe check out my work?




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