June 19, 2010
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Dreams are gone
Wishes have been betrayed
Hopes stomped upon
Inspirations become murderers
Joys now depressed
Sprits sauntered away
Happiness is dreadful
Colors turn black
Music disappeared

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BaileyBaby13 said...
Jul. 16, 2010 at 7:49 pm
AH i love it, good job,(:
Sammiegirl replied...
Jul. 17, 2010 at 11:48 am
Aww thanks :)
crubs3 This work has been published in the Teen Ink monthly print magazine. said...
Jul. 15, 2010 at 12:03 am
This is really good!! i can feel the emotion!!! if you could please rate and comment my work that would be great!! thanks and u r really good dont stop!!!
Jessss said...
Jul. 14, 2010 at 10:26 pm
I like this. :)
Teardrops said...
Jul. 14, 2010 at 10:49 am
Wow. This one is a great poem.
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