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I rememer 10 years ago, I witnessed her pain.
Her heart failure, breast cancer, and chemo in her veins.
I watched her eyes the whole time, poised and strong.
Never did i see a tear build or fall.

I sat on the floor beside her and held her hand.
That night in my dreams she told me she'll see me again .

Morning came and she sat in her chair,
Lifeless, breathless eyes wide open.
That was the first time i saw dad crying and mopin'

Before the paramedics came and took her away,
I saw that one tear fall down her face...



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EMOEMY said...
Nov. 16, 2010 at 5:32 pm
You are a really good writer, its very inspirational. I like how you used slang and showed the story viruses telling it. keep written please :)
 
emily12mhs said...
Sept. 3, 2010 at 9:45 pm
You painted the picture by your words and it was captivating! Good work!
 
ShernayB. This work has been published in the Teen Ink monthly print magazine. replied...
Sept. 3, 2010 at 9:47 pm
thank you!!
 
MissUnderstanding said...
Aug. 10, 2010 at 1:08 am
Beautiful, touching, moving, emotional. Congratulations on another lovely piece.
 
tammieb said...
Jul. 17, 2010 at 4:02 pm
I love this beautiful poem keep up the good work, you need to print all them up and let me put them in a book i'll bring my printer over.
 
ShernayB. This work has been published in the Teen Ink monthly print magazine. replied...
Jul. 17, 2010 at 5:36 pm
thank you auntie. i love you.
 
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