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Hurtful feelings

I try to become better friends with you
You dont seem to care
I just try to be nice but yet you break me down
I try to be as kind as i can but yet i seem to fail
You say i dont no anything but your very wrong
Your like an open book to me
I can see right through the page
I know whats gonna happen at the end of this story
We both get hurt in the end or mabey just me but i cry down in tears hopeing mabey you might just care
But it seems you dont and towards the end i was having a terrible time there





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Elena said...
Jul. 26, 2010 at 6:26 pm

I see how you feel...but he didn't mean to hurt you. He didn't mean to come off as he didn't care. Just wanted you to know that.

Beautiful poem. I love it...and I love you too! <3

 
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