You're Just Weak

June 13, 2010
By Kayla Mathisen BRONZE, Massapequa Park, New York
Kayla Mathisen BRONZE, Massapequa Park, New York
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Quit pretending like you got it so bad
We’re all the frickin same
It’s not that big a deal
We’re all just going insane

Don’t act like you fell all that hard
I saw you fall
And that building
Couldn’t have been more than thirty stories tall

Quit shivering
When we all lie nude in the snow
The rest of us are fine and we’re
Not superhuman either, you know?

Don’t whine to me that you haven’t eatin’
In nearly ten days
When you know that I’ve gone for months before
Without so much as a complaint

Everyone thinks it
But they won’t say it to your face
We think that you should move on,
You don’t belong in this place.

It’s not that we are strong. You’re just….. weak.

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If you have any questions about this piecs, please comment below. If you ask me too I will try to take a look at your work as well. Please read some of my other works as well. Above all, tell me what you think. I am posting my poetry here to get some feedback, and both praise and constructive criticism are welcomed. Thank you.

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on Jul. 15 2010 at 11:33 am
crubs33 DIAMOND, Lido Beach, New York
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Favorite Quote:
"The most courageous act is still to think for yourself. Aloud."- Coco Chanel
Life isn't about surviving the storm, it's about learning to dance in the rain.

Totally true... u really told completely wat u wanted to say no sugar coating :) if you could please rate and comment my work that would be great!! thanks and u r really good dont stop!!!

on Jul. 12 2010 at 4:18 pm
pinkypromise23 PLATINUM, Cranston, Rhode Island
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i know that you believe you understand what you think i said, but im not sure you realize that what you heard is not what i meant.

i really like this(: i like the second stanza alot




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