White Gloves

Pensive thoughts
like film clips,
stuttering
and jumping
across the projector
where you watch.
Pick the favorites
but don't forget to
cut out
the rejected, scattered images.
I fear I shall
be sliced away
with your surgeons hands
and disposition.
The cold, empty
eyes
watching those
pensive thoughts.





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CarlyMurphy said...
Aug. 3, 2010 at 10:12 pm
Miranda, this piece is simply beautiful, and if you don't believe me, you are in fact insane. "I fear I shall be sliced away with your surgeons hands..." What a great line. Love love love it!
 
MirandaAdelyn replied...
Aug. 12, 2010 at 4:51 pm
Thank you, Carly. :) I'm glad you like it.
 
crubs3 This work has been published in the Teen Ink monthly print magazine. said...
Jul. 15, 2010 at 11:32 am
Wow i really like this!! love all the metaphors!!!! if you could please rate and comment my work that would be great!! thanks and u r really good dont stop!!!
 
MirandaAdelyn replied...
Jul. 16, 2010 at 3:54 pm
Thanks! I appreciate your feedback! And I'll look at your stuff too. :)
 
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