White Gloves

June 13, 2010
Pensive thoughts
like film clips,
and jumping
across the projector
where you watch.
Pick the favorites
but don't forget to
cut out
the rejected, scattered images.
I fear I shall
be sliced away
with your surgeons hands
and disposition.
The cold, empty
watching those
pensive thoughts.

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CarlyMurphy said...
Aug. 3, 2010 at 10:12 pm
Miranda, this piece is simply beautiful, and if you don't believe me, you are in fact insane. "I fear I shall be sliced away with your surgeons hands..." What a great line. Love love love it!
MirandaAdelyn replied...
Aug. 12, 2010 at 4:51 pm
Thank you, Carly. :) I'm glad you like it.
crubs3 This work has been published in the Teen Ink monthly print magazine. said...
Jul. 15, 2010 at 11:32 am
Wow i really like this!! love all the metaphors!!!! if you could please rate and comment my work that would be great!! thanks and u r really good dont stop!!!
MirandaAdelyn replied...
Jul. 16, 2010 at 3:54 pm
Thanks! I appreciate your feedback! And I'll look at your stuff too. :)
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