I Talk, I Talk.

June 13, 2010
By love2run GOLD, Star Valley, Wyoming
love2run GOLD, Star Valley, Wyoming
12 articles 4 photos 64 comments

Favorite Quote:
"I failed my way to success." Thomas Edison
"What kind of crazy nut would spend two or three hours a day just running?" Pre
"A ship in harbor is safe, but that's not what ships are built for." John Shedd


I talk. I talk, but no one hears
So I don’t talk about my fears
What I care about, what I say
They never listen anyway

They’re deaf to what disturbs my mind
To all the dreams my heart does find
If it does not appeal to them, they’re deaf.
They hear no beginning, no end.

I talk. I talk, but they don’t care
They lecture me if I am scared
I try to tell them what I see
But it’s only me, apparently

I warned them, warned them of pain I felt
Like the insides of me would melt
I talked, I talked till I hit the floor
I talk no longer, I talk no more.


The author's comments:
Sometimes do you feel like nobody hears you? That's why I wrote this poem..

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on Jul. 27 2010 at 7:04 pm
inksplatters21 SILVER, Mason, Ohio
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Favorite Quote:
"Character is how you live when no one is watching."

I heard you.  breath taking poem.

on Jul. 27 2010 at 11:33 am
WritingLoverForever PLATINUM, Bowling Green, Ohio
32 articles 2 photos 198 comments

Favorite Quote:
It's not about success; it's about significance.

No one can make you feel inferior without your consent.

You're very welcome! :)

love2run GOLD said...
on Jul. 26 2010 at 10:34 pm
love2run GOLD, Star Valley, Wyoming
12 articles 4 photos 64 comments

Favorite Quote:
"I failed my way to success." Thomas Edison
"What kind of crazy nut would spend two or three hours a day just running?" Pre
"A ship in harbor is safe, but that's not what ships are built for." John Shedd

Yes, I will definitely check out your work! Thanks so much for giving feedback :)

love2run GOLD said...
on Jul. 26 2010 at 10:33 pm
love2run GOLD, Star Valley, Wyoming
12 articles 4 photos 64 comments

Favorite Quote:
"I failed my way to success." Thomas Edison
"What kind of crazy nut would spend two or three hours a day just running?" Pre
"A ship in harbor is safe, but that's not what ships are built for." John Shedd

I'm going to be a sophomore this year too! I know exactly what you mean by that..  and thanks so much for reading my work!

on Jul. 26 2010 at 1:58 am
WritingLoverForever PLATINUM, Bowling Green, Ohio
32 articles 2 photos 198 comments

Favorite Quote:
It's not about success; it's about significance.

No one can make you feel inferior without your consent.

This is exactly how I feel. Nobody seems to hear my voice; it's been like that for my whole life, and I'm gonna be a sophmore this year. It's a rare occasion that someone does seem to listen to me and I appreciate those moments but it sucks to be ignored.

on Jul. 25 2010 at 11:08 pm
haventy0uheard PLATINUM, Kings Park, New York
28 articles 0 photos 186 comments
This is amazing and I can definetely relate! I hate the feeling of being ignored, which occurs often while conversing with my parents =/ It's awesome that you're such a great writer because it lets your voice be heard =] Check out my work if you want I would appreciate any feedback

love2run GOLD said...
on Jul. 15 2010 at 5:36 pm
love2run GOLD, Star Valley, Wyoming
12 articles 4 photos 64 comments

Favorite Quote:
"I failed my way to success." Thomas Edison
"What kind of crazy nut would spend two or three hours a day just running?" Pre
"A ship in harbor is safe, but that's not what ships are built for." John Shedd

Thank you Peggy! I'm glad that you took the time to read my work!

pghozali said...
on Jul. 15 2010 at 5:21 pm
This one is really good. It would make a great song.

love2run GOLD said...
on Jul. 15 2010 at 1:02 pm
love2run GOLD, Star Valley, Wyoming
12 articles 4 photos 64 comments

Favorite Quote:
"I failed my way to success." Thomas Edison
"What kind of crazy nut would spend two or three hours a day just running?" Pre
"A ship in harbor is safe, but that's not what ships are built for." John Shedd

thanks so much! and yes I will definitely check out your work! :)

on Jul. 15 2010 at 11:31 am
crubs33 DIAMOND, Lido Beach, New York
58 articles 3 photos 750 comments

Favorite Quote:
"The most courageous act is still to think for yourself. Aloud."- Coco Chanel
Life isn't about surviving the storm, it's about learning to dance in the rain.

This is really good!! i can feel the emotion and so relate!!!!! if you could please rate and comment my work that would be great!! thanks and u r really good dont stop!!!


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