I'm a bird

June 9, 2010
By Safeleo SILVER, Iwakuni, Other
Safeleo SILVER, Iwakuni, Other
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"Looking up into the night sky is like looking into infinity - the distance is incomprehensible and therefore meaningless."
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Wings beating,
Feathers streaming,
Tail spreading,
Sun shining,
Wing blowing,
I’m flapping,
For higher flying,
I’m a bird.



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on Aug. 28 2010 at 10:24 pm
smart_blonde GOLD, Reno, Nevada
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 Simplistic. I'll let you decide wether that is a criticism or a complement.

Safeleo SILVER said...
on Aug. 22 2010 at 6:29 am
Safeleo SILVER, Iwakuni, Other
8 articles 0 photos 120 comments

Favorite Quote:
"Looking up into the night sky is like looking into infinity - the distance is incomprehensible and therefore meaningless."
-Douglas Adams

Thank you very much. I like writing these kinds of poems but this is the only one I posted.

on Aug. 20 2010 at 6:00 pm
Thesilentraven PLATINUM, Mableton, Georgia
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Favorite Quote:
"il piu nell' uno," (according to Emerson, an Italian expression for beauty)

"Unable are the loved to die, for love is immortality" ~Emily Dickinson

"The deeper that sorrow carves into your being, the more joy you can contain"
~Kahlil Gibran

I loved reading this poem. In its brevity it was both simple and beautiful, so I applaud you for it.

Safeleo SILVER said...
on Aug. 19 2010 at 10:07 pm
Safeleo SILVER, Iwakuni, Other
8 articles 0 photos 120 comments

Favorite Quote:
"Looking up into the night sky is like looking into infinity - the distance is incomprehensible and therefore meaningless."
-Douglas Adams

Thanks!                     

on Aug. 19 2010 at 9:18 pm
Just.A.Dream SILVER, Lake Geneva, Wisconsin
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Part of the J7X team. :)

I like your description of the bird! Simple but nicely written poem. :)


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