I'm a bird

June 9, 2010
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Wings beating,
Feathers streaming,
Tail spreading,
Sun shining,
Wing blowing,
I’m flapping,
For higher flying,
I’m a bird.

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smart_blonde said...
Aug. 28, 2010 at 10:24 pm
 Simplistic. I'll let you decide wether that is a criticism or a complement.
Thesilentraven This work has been published in the Teen Ink monthly print magazine. said...
Aug. 20, 2010 at 6:00 pm
I loved reading this poem. In its brevity it was both simple and beautiful, so I applaud you for it.
Safeleo replied...
Aug. 22, 2010 at 6:29 am
Thank you very much. I like writing these kinds of poems but this is the only one I posted.
A.Dreamer said...
Aug. 19, 2010 at 9:18 pm
I like your description of the bird! Simple but nicely written poem. :)
Safeleo replied...
Aug. 19, 2010 at 10:07 pm
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