Redo with you

June 9, 2010
By jordanthenunknown BRONZE, Chesepeak Beach, Maryland
jordanthenunknown BRONZE, Chesepeak Beach, Maryland
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I wish I could redo everything that lead me to you.I wish I could redo anything I ever said to you. I will always rember the nights you want to forget. I guess i should have gotten chinese insted. That one cold Febuary night you wrote your number and gave it to me. I'm just a stupid girl who fell in love way to fast. I'm laying here brused and broken and still wanting you... yea i want that redo.

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I wrote this piece when my first love broke my heart. When we met he works at pizza hut and he wrote his number on my pizza reciet. He hurt me and i still love him.

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