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Weeping Brokenly

Crying.
Someone wailing.
Loud, uninterrupted sobs.
I search for the sufferer.
Their anguish is growing; torment escalates.
I look around wildly, desperate to help.
And then, abruptly, the incessant cries just stop.
And I realize the person weeping brokenly was me.





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MelanieLouise This work has been published in the Teen Ink monthly print magazine. said...
Aug. 2, 2010 at 11:55 am
i really like this piece, very creative :) keep writing, Mel. oh and check out my work if ya get the chance
 
GangstaEyes This work has been published in the Teen Ink monthly print magazine. replied...
Aug. 13, 2010 at 10:04 am
Thanks and I will!
 
olican16 said...
Jul. 9, 2010 at 12:45 pm
I remember when we did those journal prompts!! lol do u remember mine!? this is really good!! i lvoe how you didnt tell who it was untill the end.!! hope you keep posting stuff!!
 
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