Weeping Brokenly

June 3, 2010
By Alcanno DIAMOND, Mexia, Texas
Alcanno DIAMOND, Mexia, Texas
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Favorite Quote:
"If you love life, don't waste time, for time is what life is
made up of."

-- Bruce Lee


Crying.
Someone wailing.
Loud, uninterrupted sobs.
I search for the sufferer.
Their anguish is growing; torment escalates.
I look around wildly, desperate to help.
And then, abruptly, the incessant cries just stop.
And I realize the person weeping brokenly was me.


The author's comments:
This is just something I wrote from a journal prompt - You start with a one-word sentence then two-word, etc. and you see how far you can go. Hope you like it!

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on Aug. 13 2010 at 10:04 am
Alcanno DIAMOND, Mexia, Texas
59 articles 0 photos 670 comments

Favorite Quote:
"If you love life, don't waste time, for time is what life is
made up of."

-- Bruce Lee

Thanks and I will!

on Aug. 2 2010 at 11:55 am
MelanieLouise PLATINUM, Plymouth, Minnesota
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Favorite Quote:
to live a creative life, we must lose our fear of being wrong

i really like this piece, very creative :) keep writing, Mel. oh and check out my work if ya get the chance

on Jul. 9 2010 at 12:45 pm
poeticspirit12334 PLATINUM, Groesbeck, Texas
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Favorite Quote:
Wearing a Christian T-shirt, and a cross necklace does NOT make you a Christian. , "For I know the plans I have for you," declares the Lord "They are plans to give you a hope and a future.'' Jeremiah 29:11

I remember when we did those journal prompts!! lol do u remember mine!? this is really good!! i lvoe how you didnt tell who it was untill the end.!! hope you keep posting stuff!!


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