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Baptized

May 22, 2010
By Amityyy SILVER, Hamersville, Ohio
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Baptized


Stepping into the ice cold water,


he stands there waiting for me.



He starts to pray.




I ask the Lord to forgive me.





I hold my nose






and he dunks me under the water.







Coming up,








I leave my old self under the water.

© Roopa S., San Jose, CA

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I wrote this after i got baptized.
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