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Be careful what you wish for,
It might come true,
I might come true.

No more a figment of your imagination,
Or a whimsical wish,
Fantasy and reality-
Don't you know how quickly
They make the switch?

Be careful what you wish for,
It might come true,
Watch what you speak,
For I might believe you.



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Supernova7 said...
Jul. 15, 2010 at 3:08 pm
 i thought it was ok I like the idea behind it.
 
_AMZ_ said...
Jul. 11, 2010 at 10:19 am
I liked it, but I got a bit lost on the 2nd stanza. I thought you would compare fiction to reality when you started off with "No more a figment..." I thought it would be followed by you saying "than..." and comparing that figment of imagination to something real. Other than the confusion, I can see where you were going with it, and I liked your overall ideas.
 
yes_i_am This work has been published in the Teen Ink monthly print magazine. replied...
Jul. 11, 2010 at 10:42 am

by "no more a figment.." i meant that

the said person's imagination may become reality,so i would no longer remain their imagination ...

 
_AMZ_ replied...
Jul. 13, 2010 at 1:25 am
Ah, I see, It makes more sense now, thank you :)
 
yes_i_am This work has been published in the Teen Ink monthly print magazine. replied...
Jul. 13, 2010 at 2:33 am

maybe i should have said-"no longer" instead of "no more"...

u r right...my bad

 
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