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June 5, 2010
By wind.and.rain.again BRONZE, Amherst, Massachusetts
wind.and.rain.again BRONZE, Amherst, Massachusetts
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Favorite Quote:
"What is it you wish to do with your one wild and precious life?" Mary Oliver


rain


she makes her way across the room
and lays down like an angel
knowing its gonna destroy her

who is she
why cant she see like they see:
without the stars

whispers they’ll be the death of you. shine shine girl shine

train stations and cars fly by her window
she loves him
light in her eyes streaming
saving them

rain bring her the love she so dearly needs
save her
droplets falling to her bare shoulders
falling (she’s falling)


She needs a miracle
She’s breaking herself with her own hands
cutting and bleeding
sweet glory

rain wet her hair
cascade down her back
reminisce
wash the blood away

her deep ocean eyes are her only savior
she is beautiful
rain open her heart
cut her open
secrets reveal themselves in her eyes

he sees her cross the room
destiny knife in sweet hand
mysteries and secrets flowing through her hair
he sees her

she flies
giving everything to destiny

rain wet her hair
cascade down her back
reminisce
wash the blood away

miracles happen
she turns her face to the wind
he sees her
her eyes ocean eyes

match my heart
touch my soul
FLY regardless of pain
he needs you
hearts enter hearts and break
but fly fly away ocean girl
the world is waiting

rain wet her hair
cascade down her back
reminisce
wash the blood away


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on Jul. 31 2010 at 11:27 am
wind.and.rain.again BRONZE, Amherst, Massachusetts
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Favorite Quote:
"What is it you wish to do with your one wild and precious life?" Mary Oliver

thank you so much.

i wrote this as a way of letting out my feelings when i was going through a pretty intense period of depression. so its half real half my fantasy. but thanks very much for your words  they mean a lot


on Jul. 27 2010 at 10:30 am
inksplatters21 SILVER, Mason, Ohio
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Favorite Quote:
"Character is how you live when no one is watching."

This poem is so unique, I feel like I need to read it several times to get the feel for it.  Awesome.

on Jul. 19 2010 at 3:18 pm
Thesilentraven PLATINUM, Mableton, Georgia
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Favorite Quote:
"il piu nell' uno," (according to Emerson, an Italian expression for beauty)

"Unable are the loved to die, for love is immortality" ~Emily Dickinson

"The deeper that sorrow carves into your being, the more joy you can contain"
~Kahlil Gibran

This poem was wonderful. Your writing style is powerful and dreamlike, and it holds a lot of depth. I hope to read more of it, so keep writing!

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on Jul. 19 2010 at 2:39 pm
meggyt BRONZE, Cranford, New Jersey
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Hi, this was wonderfully written. You should most definately pursue your writing more and see where it takes you. If this is real, I hope you learn that you have the wings to fly not away from everything, but through it. You can endure, without having to hurt yourself.

on Jul. 19 2010 at 8:01 am
wind.and.rain.again BRONZE, Amherst, Massachusetts
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Favorite Quote:
"What is it you wish to do with your one wild and precious life?" Mary Oliver

thanks! this is one of my first real poems and im definetly trying to continue!

on Jul. 12 2010 at 12:21 pm
Francesca BRONZE, Clermont, Florida
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Wow. This was amazing. I loved it! Never stop writing.


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