Still There

May 30, 2010
By crubs33 DIAMOND, Lido Beach, New York
crubs33 DIAMOND, Lido Beach, New York
58 articles 3 photos 750 comments

Favorite Quote:
"The most courageous act is still to think for yourself. Aloud."- Coco Chanel
Life isn't about surviving the storm, it's about learning to dance in the rain.


You hear them talking,
Behind your back,
Feel the ring in your ears,
Feel their stares, their pointed fingers,

Hear them laughing,
Gossip pouring from,
Their crimson lips.

Feel their snide looks,
Up and down, left to right,
From eyes lined in pencil,
With covers of shine.

Know they’re twirling,
Their straightened hair round,
Their manicured nails thinking,
Gosh am I glad that’s not me.

But, still hear them laughing,
And smiling, and whispering,
Towards the girl,
They don’t have to be.



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on Jul. 25 2010 at 12:06 am
crubs33 DIAMOND, Lido Beach, New York
58 articles 3 photos 750 comments

Favorite Quote:
"The most courageous act is still to think for yourself. Aloud."- Coco Chanel
Life isn't about surviving the storm, it's about learning to dance in the rain.

Thankyou!!!!!

on Jul. 24 2010 at 8:25 pm
HeatherBee BRONZE, I Live In, Texas
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Favorite Quote:
Go on and try to tear me down. I will be rising from the ground, like a skyscraper

Love is louder than the pressure to be perfect

aww :/ ...although its kinda sad, its good. its worded fantastically

on Jul. 19 2010 at 4:50 pm
crubs33 DIAMOND, Lido Beach, New York
58 articles 3 photos 750 comments

Favorite Quote:
"The most courageous act is still to think for yourself. Aloud."- Coco Chanel
Life isn't about surviving the storm, it's about learning to dance in the rain.

Thanks soo much!!!

on Jul. 19 2010 at 9:40 am
SimplyRachel PLATINUM, Charlotte, North Carolina
48 articles 6 photos 40 comments

Favorite Quote:
"Yesterday is history, tomorrow is a mystery and today is a gift, that's why we call it the present."
~Unknown
"Things change, friends leave, and life doesn't stop for anybody."
~Stepgen Chbosky

Wow! That's amazing! I can really relate to that and I like the last stanza the best. It makes me look at life in a diffrent way.

on Jul. 18 2010 at 9:23 pm
crubs33 DIAMOND, Lido Beach, New York
58 articles 3 photos 750 comments

Favorite Quote:
"The most courageous act is still to think for yourself. Aloud."- Coco Chanel
Life isn't about surviving the storm, it's about learning to dance in the rain.

Thanks!!!!!

Sania GOLD said...
on Jul. 18 2010 at 4:52 pm
Sania GOLD, Aroura, Colorado
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i like the last verse its my favorite.  it was really good XD




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