"Word"

June 8, 2010
By amb2028 GOLD, Liberty, Missouri
amb2028 GOLD, Liberty, Missouri
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Love.
Slides off my tongue,
rolls over my lips,
cooling, calming like water.

Hate.
Jumps from my throat,
Slips through my teeth,
Burns, scorches like fire.

Hope.
Streams on my voice,
Rushes with breath,
Flows, sweeps like wind.

Word.
Comes from within
In every form,
Touches the world.

The author's comments:
We were discussing the power of words and language in my Comm. Arts class and I was inspired to write this.

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on Jul. 7 2010 at 2:16 am
DannyKid33 PLATINUM, Pleasant Hill, California
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Favorite Quote:
"Don't ever let the media tell you what to look like. You're beautiful the way you are. Stay beautiful, keep it ugly." - Gerard Way.

this was so good!! i really liked it. i liked it because of the way you described words and how u say them all differently this was amazing!

trblue GOLD said...
on Jul. 6 2010 at 1:30 pm
trblue GOLD, Richmond, Virginia
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Favorite Quote:
"Too often we lose sight of life's simple pleasures. Remember, when someone annoys you, it takes 42 muscles in your face to frown. It only takes 4 muscles to extend your arm and slap that mother@#?!&* upside the head. "

your work is one of a kind.

i wonder how poets keep their luster. bacause im loosing mine, but u still have it.


on Jul. 6 2010 at 12:23 pm
Thesilentraven PLATINUM, Mableton, Georgia
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Favorite Quote:
"il piu nell' uno," (according to Emerson, an Italian expression for beauty)

"Unable are the loved to die, for love is immortality" ~Emily Dickinson

"The deeper that sorrow carves into your being, the more joy you can contain"
~Kahlil Gibran

I really liked to read this poem. It was beautifully written and you gracefully articulated what each word means.

Good Job!


on Jul. 6 2010 at 11:42 am
thezebrasgray PLATINUM, Taylorsville, Utah
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this is a really good poem

on Jul. 6 2010 at 12:47 am
CourtneyLou BRONZE, SLIDELL, Louisiana
3 articles 0 photos 35 comments

Favorite Quote:
Some would rather be miserable then risk being happy ~Robert Anthony

Beautiful :)

aeroflight said...
on Jul. 6 2010 at 12:07 am
aeroflight, Franklin, Kentucky
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Favorite Quote:
"Landshark!"

I like this poem. It is simplistic yet soothing to read. Very nice. :)

on Jul. 5 2010 at 11:08 pm
love,Haley BRONZE, Atlanta, Georgia
1 article 6 photos 4 comments

Favorite Quote:
Who owns my heart? Is it love or is it art?
--Miley Cyrus, "Who Owns My Heart"

I really like it.. There's something that I don't really like... And I can't seem to pick it out... Maybe it's just the pattern. But I love the use of words and the message comes across(:




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