Battlefield

May 27, 2010
By Sean Kinsman BRONZE, Park City, Utah
Sean Kinsman BRONZE, Park City, Utah
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Whistle
Here I stand
The last line of defense
The game is mine to win or lose
My anger is fueled by my last loss between the pipes

On my crease you’re dead,
I think to myself
The look of surprise as he hits the ground
I love it
The “hole” is my warzone

We go down early
I become more violent
And am penalized
The score reaches 14-2

I stop caring

Defeated
Here I stand
Whistle

The author's comments:
If you don't get what it's about it's lacrosse

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on Jul. 5 2010 at 6:22 pm
splenda. SILVER, Century, Florida
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"Fiction is obliged to stick to possibilities. Truth isn't." Mark Twain

this is good. it could actually symbolize uch more than a game.




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