What Do You See?

May 27, 2010
By chartothalatte GOLD, Cleveland Heights, Ohio
chartothalatte GOLD, Cleveland Heights, Ohio
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When you look at me,
What do you see?
Do you see a girl full of life,
A girl full of energy and smiles?
Or do you see a girl that never laughs,
A girl that never eats?

I believe that is what you see,
What all of you see.

When I look at me,
What do I see?
Do I see a girl full of memories,
A girl full of jokes and innuendos?
Or do I see a girl that never listens,
a girl that could always be thinner?

I believe that I what you see,
What all of you want me to see.


The author's comments:
Not sure how I could describe this one...

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on Jul. 6 2010 at 7:36 pm
christin.bass SILVER, Eagle River, Alaska
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you will never make it big if you dream small. youll never learn if your living in the past and youll never understand if you were to fast forward, just press play and live!

I totally relate to this. To me it is very powerful! Great job i loved it.

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on Jul. 5 2010 at 9:59 pm
MLStamp SILVER, Annandale, Virginia
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Thats what we all are. Ameteurs. We don't live long enough to become anything else. -Charlie Chaplin

nice I can really relate to your style of writing!

on Jul. 5 2010 at 8:19 pm
Monica@Roman SILVER, New Haven, Connecticut
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"This too shall pass"

i like this it's short but gets to the point. good work ;)

on Jul. 5 2010 at 5:48 pm
CourtneyLou BRONZE, SLIDELL, Louisiana
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Favorite Quote:
Some would rather be miserable then risk being happy ~Robert Anthony

I like this alot :)




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