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Please wake me when I’m free
So I may clear this uncertainty
And erase this fog that enshrouds me
I am not about power and greed
I created the American dream
After all, money does not grow on trees
I am what this country desperately needs
So no more bailouts for me
Just let me be

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mandapanda9736 This work has been published in the Teen Ink monthly print magazine. said...
Aug. 29, 2010 at 8:59 am:
wow, i absolutely love the message coming out of this poem, its great! good job!
tdnarb replied...
Aug. 30, 2010 at 8:53 pm :
Thank you!
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Cigg.Sunn said...
Jul. 7, 2010 at 12:25 pm:

You've found a perfect picture to match your poem!

"And erase this fog that enshourds me, I am not about power and greed."

That Was my favorite line. It spoke to me well. Great write. :D

A_Fate_UnknownThis teenager is a 'regular' and has contributed a lot of work, comments and/or forum posts, and has received many votes and high ratings over a long period of time. replied...
Jul. 8, 2010 at 10:42 pm :
wow man, this is prolly my favorite outa you.
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