Substandard Hallucinations

May 31, 2010
take this to your grave.
we're off to paint the town
with a can of kerosene
but we won't burn it down.
we're only waiting for that moment
when death decides to light
his first and final cigarette
to initiate eternal night.

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Hay_Wire This work has been published in the Teen Ink monthly print magazine. said...
Jul. 2, 2010 at 10:11 pm
wow.. amazing. nothign else to say, cept i think i need to go read it again
Kristinalynn J. replied...
Jul. 2, 2010 at 11:49 pm
I LOVE BMTH!!! this poem is a little dark but i like it like that and i think this is REALLY good!!!!!!!!!! my fav bmth song is suicide letter. wat bout you?
rawrpiranha replied...
Jul. 7, 2010 at 6:04 pm
awe thanks! hahah i really like Diamonds Aren't Forever. (:
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