Substandard Hallucinations

May 31, 2010
By rawrpiranha SILVER, Godfrey, Illinois
rawrpiranha SILVER, Godfrey, Illinois
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take this to your grave.
we're off to paint the town
with a can of kerosene
but we won't burn it down.
we're only waiting for that moment
when death decides to light
his first and final cigarette
to initiate eternal night.


The author's comments:
this is a little dark. maybe i shouldn't listen to Bring Me The Horizon when i write. hahah

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on Jul. 7 2010 at 6:04 pm
rawrpiranha SILVER, Godfrey, Illinois
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awe thanks! hahah i really like Diamonds Aren't Forever. (:

on Jul. 2 2010 at 11:49 pm
krissy775 SILVER, Charlotte, North Carolina
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Favorite Quote:
"everything happens for a reason"

I LOVE BMTH!!! this poem is a little dark but i like it like that and i think this is REALLY good!!!!!!!!!! my fav bmth song is suicide letter. wat bout you?

on Jul. 2 2010 at 10:11 pm
Hay_Wire PLATINUM, Independence, Missouri
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wow.. amazing. nothign else to say, cept i think i need to go read it again




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