The Key

May 26, 2010
amicrazyorisitjusteveryoneelse PLATINUM, Kula, Hawaii
48 articles 0 photos 198 comments

Favorite Quote:
"Everything you dream is real and everything real is a dream"


My name is unheard
it is forever unspoken
never said is this word
because my heart is broken
glass shards are impaling my skin
it feels so good to me
to feel the blood flowing out from within
to feel the scars that will forever haunt me

Fading to black and my eyes are heavy
my heart slows its beat
and I know I am ready
to finish this feat
I have gone out
on a chariot of fire
because I have no doubts
and death is my last desire

As I take it all in
my breathing slows down
I let the darkness win
and I go without a sound
no one seems to notice
that I'm lying on the floor
all I had left was this
this key to my hearts door

You could've taken it
I offered so many times
you just didn't commit
to all of my rhymes
you didn't accept
what I offered so freely
but my memories of you are still kept
in this alternate realtiy


The author's comments:
not my best but i like it

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on Sep. 14 2010 at 10:07 pm
amicrazyorisitjusteveryoneelse PLATINUM, Kula, Hawaii
48 articles 0 photos 198 comments

Favorite Quote:
"Everything you dream is real and everything real is a dream"

I actually didn't like this the first time I read/wrote it but I really like it now:)

on Sep. 14 2010 at 10:00 pm
amicrazyorisitjusteveryoneelse PLATINUM, Kula, Hawaii
48 articles 0 photos 198 comments

Favorite Quote:
"Everything you dream is real and everything real is a dream"

Thanks:)  I really like this one too:)  One of my favorites:)

on Sep. 14 2010 at 9:59 pm
amicrazyorisitjusteveryoneelse PLATINUM, Kula, Hawaii
48 articles 0 photos 198 comments

Favorite Quote:
"Everything you dream is real and everything real is a dream"

thanks:)   I will right now

on Sep. 13 2010 at 3:21 am
hxcRocker DIAMOND, Haiku, Hawaii
59 articles 2 photos 88 comments
Wow. One of my favorites so far. Very meaningful and flawless rhymes

on Sep. 12 2010 at 11:45 am
Zazawish777 GOLD, KC, MO, Missouri
16 articles 2 photos 100 comments

Favorite Quote:
life isn't passing me by, it's trying to run me over!

I really Like this!It' s great. 5 stars! please rate and comment on my work. thanks.

on Sep. 12 2010 at 10:09 am
Boosflash DIAMOND, Jacksonville, Florida
54 articles 0 photos 2066 comments

Favorite Quote:
Get, Got, Gotten.

funny, everyone says that. sure thing captain.

on Sep. 12 2010 at 12:49 am
amicrazyorisitjusteveryoneelse PLATINUM, Kula, Hawaii
48 articles 0 photos 198 comments

Favorite Quote:
"Everything you dream is real and everything real is a dream"

Haha   thanks?? haha   I am doing my dance:)

on Sep. 11 2010 at 3:05 pm
Boosflash DIAMOND, Jacksonville, Florida
54 articles 0 photos 2066 comments

Favorite Quote:
Get, Got, Gotten.

I really like this captain. and i love the rhyming scheme. do your dance.

on Aug. 29 2010 at 1:52 pm
amicrazyorisitjusteveryoneelse PLATINUM, Kula, Hawaii
48 articles 0 photos 198 comments

Favorite Quote:
"Everything you dream is real and everything real is a dream"

thank you!!

Emo Metalheads 4 life!!! haha


on Aug. 28 2010 at 10:41 pm
JohnDeereGirl DIAMOND, Westerlo, New York
61 articles 36 photos 216 comments

Favorite Quote:
"I'd rather be hated for who I am, than loved for who I'm not"
"Somewhere betweeen us talking, you saying I deserve better, and you making me laugh when I wanted to cry, I fell in love with you."

OO, I really like this! And, emo people are totally amazing!! The nicest person I had ever met was an emo metalhead! Love your work!




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