Honest Lies

May 30, 2010
By JePeutVousVoir GOLD, Danville, Virginia
JePeutVousVoir GOLD, Danville, Virginia
17 articles 0 photos 14 comments

Favorite Quote:
when love begins to sicken and decay. It useth and enforced ceremony.


Tell me the truth
the whole truth
and nothing but the truth.

Curvature and play on words
create the perfect facade...

Carefully spill your words
onto the pitch black canvas
color your lines white...

So nothing but the truth
means
everything but...

I believe everything,
my canvas drips glass tears,
as your honesty plays invisible.

Carpet cutter
slash marks
display the perfect scene
of carefully planned strategic words.

And as I shred here
spilling glass shards...
as you smile indignately
with a look in your eye..
as if to say
"You can't say I didn't tell you so."



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This article has 13 comments.


on Aug. 3 2011 at 6:45 pm
secrets_of_silence GOLD, Gisborne, Other
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Favorite Quote:
life had i loved the more
had it but passed away
as quietly as the day
ebbs from the darkening star.


-emanuel litvinoff

this is definatly mag worthy

on Jul. 8 2010 at 11:33 am
Boosflash DIAMOND, Jacksonville, Florida
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Favorite Quote:
Get, Got, Gotten.

i know i'm not supposed to respond but i'm gonna say merci anyway. you can just respond in your head if you like. serioulsy.

on Jul. 7 2010 at 1:35 pm
JePeutVousVoir GOLD, Danville, Virginia
17 articles 0 photos 14 comments

Favorite Quote:
when love begins to sicken and decay. It useth and enforced ceremony.

haha, You make me laugh. :D


on Jul. 3 2010 at 12:14 pm
Boosflash DIAMOND, Jacksonville, Florida
54 articles 0 photos 2066 comments

Favorite Quote:
Get, Got, Gotten.

merci captain!!! i'm so glad you seasoned my steak with that comment!!!

on Jul. 2 2010 at 8:22 pm
JePeutVousVoir GOLD, Danville, Virginia
17 articles 0 photos 14 comments

Favorite Quote:
when love begins to sicken and decay. It useth and enforced ceremony.

haha, so I checked out your work and I was very impressed. You are very talented.(:

on Jul. 2 2010 at 6:53 pm
Boosflash DIAMOND, Jacksonville, Florida
54 articles 0 photos 2066 comments

Favorite Quote:
Get, Got, Gotten.

oui oui captain.

on Jul. 1 2010 at 1:43 pm
JePeutVousVoir GOLD, Danville, Virginia
17 articles 0 photos 14 comments

Favorite Quote:
when love begins to sicken and decay. It useth and enforced ceremony.

Haha, I guess you are correct.

on Jul. 1 2010 at 3:30 am
Boosflash DIAMOND, Jacksonville, Florida
54 articles 0 photos 2066 comments

Favorite Quote:
Get, Got, Gotten.

read some of the stuff in the mag, not much talent. if they had your talent they'd recognize your talent and say"oh this should be in the mag." but color blind horses cant tell red dots from blue dots.

on Jun. 30 2010 at 4:28 pm
JePeutVousVoir GOLD, Danville, Virginia
17 articles 0 photos 14 comments

Favorite Quote:
when love begins to sicken and decay. It useth and enforced ceremony.

Ha What do you mean they arent as talented, they wuld have to be wouldnt they?  But thank you so much again.....I just really want to make it in there for once. I have been on here for a while and I havent made it yet, nor have I made one with as many comments either.

satan666 said...
on Jun. 30 2010 at 3:12 pm
You're amazing. Absolutely ravishing.

on Jun. 30 2010 at 12:32 pm
Boosflash DIAMOND, Jacksonville, Florida
54 articles 0 photos 2066 comments

Favorite Quote:
Get, Got, Gotten.

if you get in there, it'd be with the one you least expected to get published, because the editors aren't as talented as you are.

P.S. I can see you too, captain.


on Jun. 29 2010 at 3:35 pm
JePeutVousVoir GOLD, Danville, Virginia
17 articles 0 photos 14 comments

Favorite Quote:
when love begins to sicken and decay. It useth and enforced ceremony.

Oh!Thank you! I wish to be in there someday..I dont know if I ever will though...haha, but thankyou!

on Jun. 29 2010 at 12:27 pm
Boosflash DIAMOND, Jacksonville, Florida
54 articles 0 photos 2066 comments

Favorite Quote:
Get, Got, Gotten.

man you're really good captain. we need more people like yopu. and i love the last line. this really should have been in the magazine. 5 stars captain.


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