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Red roses
dried and wilted.
Boxes of chocolates
now melted
and smeared
all overthe marble counter tops.
Years' worth of cards,
shredded to bits,
tossed here and there.
A love,
once
one so true
ain't nothin' now.
We're nothing.
This is all we have left
of what we once were.
So blinded by love,
caught up in the moment.
How cliche.





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Boosflash This work has been published in the Teen Ink monthly print magazine. said...
Jun. 28, 2010 at 1:06 am
I love the negative pessimistic bitter anitsocial grudge-carrying angry-thing. 5 stars captain.
 
taytay07 replied...
Jul. 3, 2010 at 8:51 am
Haha Thank you! :) I was feeling rather bitter the day I wrote it.
 
Boosflash This work has been published in the Teen Ink monthly print magazine. replied...
Jul. 3, 2010 at 12:07 pm
you have a way of emotioning your capture. welcome you're captain.
 
taytay07 replied...
Jul. 3, 2010 at 12:34 pm
Really? I've never been told that before...I just try to write how I feel. Again, thank you! :))
 
Boosflash This work has been published in the Teen Ink monthly print magazine. replied...
Jul. 3, 2010 at 4:42 pm
thing captain sure. you know,when you say you try to write how you feel, you're just saying what I just said, so I'm not exactly sure what your point was captain.
 
taytay07 replied...
Jul. 3, 2010 at 9:22 pm
Yeah...huh...I guess you're right. :l Hahaha my mistake
 
Boosflash This work has been published in the Teen Ink monthly print magazine. replied...
Jul. 6, 2010 at 1:05 am
so i guess this is where we go our seperate ways. keep writing! I'm really gonna miss you captain....
 
taytay07 replied...
Jul. 6, 2010 at 8:11 am
I guess so..Haha And I shall do just that..keep writing that is! :D Miss ya to.
 
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