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His Stuck-Up Heart

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He's so dramatic,
Stuck-up, and full of himself.
He's always trying to impress, 
And show off.
He annoys me like crazy.

The strangest thing,
Is that I feel kind of,
Attracted to that.

I think I want him,
To hold me in his,
Dramatic arms.
And I want to feel the beat,
Of his stuck-up heart.





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Boosflash This work has been published in the Teen Ink monthly print magazine. said...
Jul. 18, 2010 at 6:33 pm
you know, I read this again, and this is really awesome.
 
Boosflash This work has been published in the Teen Ink monthly print magazine. said...
Jun. 27, 2010 at 8:44 pm
very nice captain. i like the vague irony of it. 5 stars.
 
Patience97 replied...
Jul. 18, 2010 at 12:47 am
haha thanks :)))
 
Boosflash This work has been published in the Teen Ink monthly print magazine. replied...
Jul. 18, 2010 at 6:32 pm
oui oui captain.
 
crubs3 This work has been published in the Teen Ink monthly print magazine. said...
Jun. 27, 2010 at 8:00 pm
I love it!!! its so great and EVERYONE can relate!! if you could please comment and rate my work that would be great!! thanks and great work!!!
 
Patience97 replied...
Jul. 18, 2010 at 12:48 am
thank you :)
 
AbneyT said...
Jun. 27, 2010 at 7:40 pm

Amazing Write!

I'm not going to lie after the first line or two, I'm thinking ergh, this is just another unorganized vent. Then the last stanza was PERFECT!. Good Job!!! <3 it!!

 
Patience97 replied...
Jul. 18, 2010 at 12:47 am
Thank you so much :) My writing has always been a little... weak, so, I came to teenink hoping I could make it stronger.
 
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